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Old 09-07-2007, 02:52 AM
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Default Re: My Community Website

Very nice header and a lot of work however some tweaking might be in order.

-First: the text inside green square moves changes too quickly and in the very first text message you use upper and lower case for all words except "WE" not repeated anywhere else so looks like a typo.
-The NavBar or rather two NavBars take away from the beauty of your site. Consider grouping categories, make it your website easy to navigate and elegant. Also, might want to separate "Security" from "Baboons" it can be interpreted or read "Security Baboons" which make some laugh. : - ))
-Consider either filling the top horizontal NavBar or getting rid of it altogether; makes it look as a frame around the content.
-Unless there is a legal reason to use bold for the disclaimer, leave it regular.
-Takes a bit longer than it should to load.

Good luck.
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