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Old 09-17-2007, 12:33 AM
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Default Re: My First Website Ever

Totally agree with Vasili's comments. Your site needs some 'girliness' to it... You want these ladies to spend their hard earned money so you have to give them a good reason to spend it with you. Your site doesn't give off it's true purpose at first glance, the colours are more what I would expect to see on a 'Save the local park' website more than a pamper party site.

I also wanted to click around to see what you offer but I can't find anything to click on?

You say you want to add games??? I am not sure I understand? Do you do pamper parties or sell PS2 games?

You need to find a purpose for the site and gear it around this. Don't add any more than you have to.

I know you said it was not finished yet but I think it is far too early for a review in this stage sorry.

I only offer my opinions, please don't take offence, I am sure you have worked very hard on this, just don't want to see you fall down before you start.

I have made a pamper party site too, happy for you to have a look and maybe get some ideas from

www.pampered-perfect.co.uk
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