 Re: Please review site and critique. | |
Hi there ... it is looking good but my comments from a month ago I would make again ....
really like your website and think you are off to a good start. I have a few comments .. hope you don't mind.
On your front page you have a 57 word sentence ... way too verbose ... I played around a bit a something like this may be better ...
We offer clients the best when planning a legal marriage, a blessing or any other ceremony - religious or secular. Our associates are selected with care so we can work together to offer you a service second to none.
I also notice your pages are unbalanced in the browser ... normally we try to stay to 800 wide and click centre in browser to centre the page when you see them on the web.
There is also a stray text menu on the right-hand bottom of the screen.
Something that may look good too is a border around the whole page to give it a finished look.
Keep up the good work .... hope everything goes ewll for you.
Also I wonder at the colour changes on all your pages and all the placement of the menu at the bottom of the page ... it makes the site look a bit disjointed ... keep up the good work ...I love what you are trying to achieve ... |