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Old 10-05-2007, 03:05 AM
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Default Re: Please review and comment on my site

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Originally Posted by webwiz View Post
can u guys please review and comment on my website, please feel free to say anything that you think could help my site...
Thanks in advance

www.southcoastvibz.net
first look is nice colors easy layout
couple of issues
1. you have duplicate menu buttons on the left - two useful things, two restaurants, etc, and they don''t go where they say..
2. your header - with the drop shadow the name of your site is almost unreadable
3. there is some overlapping text in the footer on one of the pages, says "sport" over your footer info.

You might want to have another set of eyes look over the sentence structure. Throughout there are a few 'voice' issues, i.e., where you have started off in the first person and switched to the third person in the same sentence..These are hard to see when you have been writing and reading your own site again and again. Fresh eyes, will spot it right away,

In general a nice site.
good job.
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