You did it right, however, I don't think what you put IN the h1 is of value. It doesn't look or sound like a headline and I'm curious if you did research to find out if that's how people are searching? Using Help building confidence? Without doing the research myself - I'd thing the following would be better:
Build Confidence | Self Esteem - with Hypnosis - NLP

In other words, shorten it up, use the terms/phrases people are using to search with - and get rid of as many or all extraneous terms.

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