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Old 04-13-2008, 09:06 PM
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Default Re: Finally my site is on the air!

hi firstlionking,

Your very welcome! Got a little more help for ya.

What Adavant was talking about is the "title" for your home page (that shows in the tab on a browser). It still says home; rt click on page and fix that in page properties.

I run internet explorer 7 as default, but also use firefox to check my webpages.

These pages have overlapping text in IE7: opportunity, faq, affiliate, the difference, ownership benefits.

Next I have some spelling fixes for you:

Elite services page....under maid and housekeeping...lenins = linens, toleitry = toiletry
under translator...langrage = language
under cook...carter = cater

Dominican Republic page...2nd paragraph...image = imagine, ratten = rattan, plams = palms, decorrated = decorated, gourmate = gourmet
4th pargraph...450,00 = 450.00
6th paragraph...deplete = depleting or emptying

Affiliate page...Mak = Make, Extrodinary = Extraordinary, liveing = living

Opportunity page...amongest = amongst

The Difference page...enormouse = enormous

Overall, I like the feel and content of your site. Even with the little problems, there is a feeling that you are well-qualified in this field. Tweaking the site should make it great.

I would suggest that you not underline text that isn't linked to something else. The use of a different font and color does it for you. Underlining makes it hard to read. Just a suggestion.

Be aware that I am still learning optimization and html, so I cannot help you with SEO, i.e. meta tags, h1, etc. Hopefully someone who can check those things will reply to your post.

Best Regards, :)
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