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Old 05-03-2008, 03:30 AM
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Default Re: Please review my site and help

Hi Double Vision,

Off to a good clean start... a couple of points to ponder:
  • Maybe have a look at renaming your logo picture (eg. uk_grave_vase.jpg or any other keyword rich name) and moving it to the left as your content is left justified. (IMO it'll even out your page nicely)
  • Your tag line is loaded with good keywords but it's part of your logo.jpg (so SE's can't read it) consider removing it from logo picture and then adding it as text with BV.
  • Your sliding teasers and links on the right are great, but you are having to explain it's operation (way to much content or space for keyword rich content is wasted on explaining how to navigate it)
  • Consider re-introducing the visible scroll bar, as then you could move your contact details to the bottom of the page.
  • The 'Add to Favourites...' looks out of place for two reasons:
    • it's positioned at the top where your header could be and
    • visitors haven't had a chance to decide if it's a favourite yet LOL
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