05-09-2008, 12:18 AM
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 | Brigadier General | | Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Australia
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 Re: New website for review, please | |
Hi Tom ... it looks great ... my main comment would be the website is mostly written in the passive voice and is verbose. this makes it hard work to read ... I have given a couple of examples to show you what I mean ... Electrical Trade Test Preparation This course will prepare the learner to complete his (it should be gender neutral) Electrical Trade Test successfully. The content of this course is fully aligned with the Trade Test and will provide the learner with the necessary skills to complete all the tasks as prescribed by Department of Labour. Put in the time to prepare for your Electrical Trade Test. Renkalec Training Centre offers this course to provide you with the skills to complete your trade test in line with Department of Labour requirements. Full time option
A period of 4 weeks is required to prepare the candidate.- four weeks full-time - Monday to Thursday (09:00 to 17:00)
- Friday (09:00 to 14:00)
Should the assessment not follow directly after the course, a two week revision period will be provided. (why would assessment not immediately follow is the question that pops into my head when I read this. I would think this would be something told to students on their first day or as part of their enrolment?)
Something I would expect to find under course description is a list of the skills I can expect to learn ... everything is very vague and the overview is not expanded on from the jump page ... it does not provide clear information of what the learning outcomes are ... only Department of Labour requirements ... a lot of people may not know what they are ... etc ... and this may alienate those who don't ... Keep up the good work ... |