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Old 05-09-2008, 06:44 AM
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Default Re: New website for review, please

Hi Andrew,
Regarding your first post (copied), my comments in BLUE:

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Looking good and ahead of time... a couple of comments:
  • I think you are giving valuable home page space to 'where are we' when you have a 'location page'
  • Will talk to the owner, but yes, I agree.
  • Your page titles contain no keywords (Oooops, thanks, I will fix)
  • I feel the 'tell a friend' button is out of place and detracting from sites look IMO. (Owner wanted an animated TAF. I would prefer a text link right on top of the header area, but I will see him this morning).
    Because of this there are loads of fast movements catching the eye while the visitors are trying to read (consider slowing the slideshow down a little) (Thanks, I will slow it down. Wanted to use script to advance manually, but time is limited and so the budget, lol).
  • Spelling in the main headline "elecrical" (Oops, thanks)
  • On the 'about us' page the VH link is overlapping proudly SA (First thing I noticed when I viewd site this morning on big screen) and I'm not sure about the weather on the page. (Maybe I should move it to the accommodation page)
  • The office location page template is shorter than the other pages and the VH link is lonely at the bottom of the page. (Also noticed this morning, thanks anyway)
  • In the department of labour links there is a missing space between &Safety (Thanks)
  • The 'contact' on the accommodations page should be in bold (end quote) (Thanks).
Thanks a million Andrew. So, still work to be done, lol.
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