Not too bad, the spacing is a little off. Could you make the boxes larger, to take up all the white space, or do you have something else planned. You need to read and reread your text. the first sentence, or should I say start is missing an "a". In the second or third section you have the word "have" which is plural, and talk about a single change. Looks good, hang in there.

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Mike

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