Re: I Redesign My Site | |
John, I looked at your new eazy123 site. It still is more than 1000 wide so your border doesn't show on the right, without scrolling. it is better though. One more thing I noticed right off. You need to reread, and reread again your text. Hello and thank you for stopping by. This is my website and at this website you should find anything you need. If it is not here then I am working on it . I would like you to think of my site as a big great (big, or great big)Sunday Paper , With all the great shopping adds . Well this site has a lot of that and I am going to be setting up an info site too ! We all need a good site that has great info . So what brings you to my site today? , a(A)re you looking to do little shopping but don't know what you want or need. ,Take a look around and maybe you will find it . Do you want to play some old school Arcade Games, well I ('ve got, or have) got five to pick from and I play them too., I like the older games just as much as I like the new games, I gust(guess) it all depends on my mood. Well I hope you find with(what) you need and I am getting back to work on my site so I can make it bigger and big er and more help full as well , Just now there just a lot of adds but that how I get paid ,So the more the better . All add are good it just depents on the add and what it is your looking for. On the web there a lot that's . My girl friend bought some make up stuff that she spent 20 dollar and she got a lot of items, well she like it. It was from e.l.f make up for a buck . I bought a game for iwin for 10 bucks and I like that ! Well I gust their something here for everyone and I hope you keep come back and shop from my site ,instead of shopping right at there site , this way I will get my 1% and you will still get you're great deal and we are happy together. well I got to go how but I will write you something new in a few weeks I am not going to spell check this so I sorry for the miss spell of the words .
You get the idea!!!
I realize you put a disclaimer at the bottom but this is really bad.
Good Luck!!
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