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Old 07-02-2008, 02:41 AM
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Default Re: Please give me some inspiration

I feel that the word "city" needs to be in your header. And put a good title in the index page instead of "home"(do not confuse this with page names).

On your products page, (also needs good title instead of "products") the packages listed as they are now can be confusing and kinda seem to run together. Maybe rethinking the way you list your packages will help you to make this page easier to understand from a customer's point of view. I would take the very top "Please Note" and put it at the bottom of the page instead.

You really need a privacy policy page for any customers you might have from California, etc. This also helps with your site's professional image.

You have a really great start to your site! As you know, web sites require ongoing work and updated content, so keep up the good work and Good Luck!
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