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Old 09-12-2006, 03:58 PM
retirementgirl retirementgirl is offline
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Default Re: My new website-Lower Your Blood Pressure Naturally

Thank you soooo much for taking the time to give me your invaluable comments, especially regarding the colour scheme and page length.

Regarding the page length, this page is really a Sales Letter which is typical of most sites selling ebooks. My concern is that If the content is broken up into several pages there is no guarantee that persons will visit all the pages. Additionally the information needs to flow from the opening of the letter to the end. Maybe I talk too much and the sales leter is too lengthy. Anyhow I do agree that it is alot to digest.

Based on the comments, I will definately need to do some more work because the information I am providing is very relevant and I know will help many so I need to be able to attract people not turn them off.

Thanks again I really appreciate it.

Lesia
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