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  • I know this might hurt but here go's

    Hi,
    Just finished re doing my site again. After last post on here and am ready for the next set of critiques of you guys.
    Like the dentist, hurts but worth it afterwards
    Thanks
    Paul
    www.billinghamcharitytrophy.com

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    Re: I know this might hurt but here go's

    Is it a site promoting Vodahost or Boxing? I can't tell from your home page?
    Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

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    • #3
      Re: I know this might hurt but here go's

      neither

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      • #4
        Re: I know this might hurt but here go's

        Originally posted by pburgum View Post
        neither
        Well if its neither.. what are supposed to do with it? what use is it to the viewer?

        Karen

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          You need some kind of content on there to let people know what the site/your organization is all about. You have three BV ads, 2 that nearly cover the page and one big image of a boxer, no one browsing by your site will have any clue as to what it is about.
          Reguards
          Ed
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          • #6
            Re: I know this might hurt but here go's

            Sorry that was a arsey post,
            Get what your saying there Ed, Karen.
            A lot of work cut down so quick with little embellishment on the crit.
            Cheers
            Paul
            www.billinghamcharitytrophy.com

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            • #7
              Re: I know this might hurt but here go's

              Originally posted by pburgum View Post
              Sorry that was a arsey post,
              Get what your saying there Ed, Karen.
              A lot of work cut down so quick with little embellishment on the crit.
              Cheers
              Paul
              www.billinghamcharitytrophy.com
              Well theres nothing there to crit. You have Voda ads.. which is great.. and you have a boxer...not much else to go on. If you are selling trophies.. then.. thats what you need to show us.

              Karen

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                And Marincky
                Sorry for that comment guys,

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                • #9
                  Re: I know this might hurt but here go's

                  Cheer up mate its not that bad, loose the big BV ad from the main body of the page, loose the big flyer for open mic night (you have a smaller, less distorted version on the right already) and in that space ad some content about what the site is intended to be / used for or some other revelent content.
                  Reguards
                  Ed
                  www.dsondesigns.com
                  www.marseillesyouthsports.com
                  www.300hitter.com
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                    lol its ok, I wasn't intending any malice and nor was I seeing any back... I was merely pointing out that, of course it's good to promote VH/BV but as much as they will love you for it, put your content first. I found it very confusing to what it is your site is about.
                    Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

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                    • #11
                      Re: I know this might hurt but here go's

                      Have i got this wrong critiquing the website or the opening page. Fair point not alot on the first page. But was hoping for feedback on full site.
                      Cheers
                      Paul

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                      • #12
                        Re: I know this might hurt but here go's

                        Thanks Guys, i need a chill pill
                        This is only a sideline to actually organising the charity events and my day job lol
                        Think i'm getting to addicted to it lol
                        Get where your all coming from and will work on the comments.
                        Cheers
                        Paul (The Boxing Trophy Guy)
                        lol

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                        • #13
                          Re: I know this might hurt but here go's

                          Paul, No comments can be a good thing... I didn't find anything throughout the site to comment on, all looking good matey. Just the previous issue as you already know ; - )
                          Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

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                          • #14
                            Re: I know this might hurt but here go's

                            The rest of the pages are not as bad, loose all the adds except for one, maybe two if they are small per page. Some of the pages are a little light on content, a few more good pictures can help to not only fill the space but convey your story. Maybe put the stuff from the about us page on your home page and get rid of the about us page or elaborate more on that page.
                            Reguards
                            Ed
                            www.dsondesigns.com
                            www.marseillesyouthsports.com
                            www.300hitter.com
                            www.bigjk.net
                            How to add JAlbum to your site

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                            • #15
                              Re: I know this might hurt but here go's

                              Thanks Ed and Marincky
                              Your comments are all good, already re jigging index page and will go from there.
                              Can i get a box that scrolls down i could put my news on and not take upto much space?
                              Cheers Paul
                              www.billinghamcharitytrophy.com

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