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    Hi,
    Please can you test my site! It has the same purpose as my last site but i decided my site needed a change of name.
    here it is - www.british-classic-cars.co.uk
    thanks,
    Matt

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    Re: My new site

    Very nice, not much different from your other site (which I liked also). You might think about making the guest book a little longer so that users can actually see that someone wrote in it. Anyway good job.
    Reguards
    Ed
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      Re: My new site

      One thing to fix: At the top of your page it's supposed to say "British Classic Cars." The final "s" is on a second line, hiding behind one of your nav buttons. You just need to use the blue handles to give your text a bit more room.
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      • #4
        Re: My new site

        I haven't seen your old site, but this one looks nice and clean. I agree with Ed about the guestbook. I think making the iFrame longer will take it up a notch.

        Great job!
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        • #5
          Re: My new site

          Thank you for everyone who has commented so far. I will make changes accordingly.
          If you haven't seen my previous website then you can see it here: www.miporganisation.com
          The layout is very alike.
          Matt

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          • #6
            Re: My new site

            Hi
            When your site loaded a lot of the text was out of sync and overlaying the next sentence

            I found the photograph of Mr Parsons poor quality which set me wondering why you didn't have a better quality photo and when I'm considering buying something visual all images on the site affect my judgement of the quality I'm to expect.

            I would have liked to see a photograph of a print made up ready for sale & I wondered whether the made up prints were signed ? which is why they are a limited edition of 500 as now Mr Parsons is deceased no further signed versions will be available if this is the case I would point this out in the sales blurb

            and I noticed a couple of errors

            Subject "inks" conflicts with verb "ensures."
            so should read either

            fast inks ensure
            or fast ink ensures

            also I think manufactures should read manufacturer's

            Mr Parsons was a very talented artist I enjoyed looking at his work nice site


            I hope this is helpful

            Mooncatxx

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              Re: My new site

              Originally posted by mooncatxx View Post
              Hi
              When your site loaded a lot of the text was out of sync and overlaying the next sentence

              I found the photograph of Mr Parsons poor quality which set me wondering why you didn't have a better quality photo and when I'm considering buying something visual all images on the site affect my judgement of the quality I'm to expect.

              I would have liked to see a photograph of a print made up ready for sale & I wondered whether the made up prints were signed ? which is why they are a limited edition of 500 as now Mr Parsons is deceased no further signed versions will be available if this is the case I would point this out in the sales blurb

              and I noticed a couple of errors

              Subject "inks" conflicts with verb "ensures."
              so should read either

              fast inks ensure
              or fast ink ensures

              also I think manufactures should read manufacturer's

              Mr Parsons was a very talented artist I enjoyed looking at his work nice site


              I hope this is helpful

              Mooncatxx
              Thank you very much! I appreciate the detail which you have gone into explaining the errors on this site, and will make changes accordingly.
              Thanks again!
              Matt

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