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  • Which page is Best

    I'm bring back "The Everlasting Story" and have tons to do..But your thoughts are always needed. This is written for kids by kids.



    http://www.fastlincs.com/the-everlasting-story3.html
    http://www.fastlincs.com/the-everlasting-story.html
    Sharon Chajin

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    Hello Sharon,

    Second one for SURE! I loved it, but loads a little slow. Your title reminds me of the never ending story. But 2nd one really stood out for me. =)
    Best Regards,

    Robert A. Kerr

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    • #3
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      I like that 1 too.
      Thanks
      Sharon Chajin

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      • #4
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        Hi Sharon,
        I love both, the second opens faster and that may influence some choices.
        I love the idea, and hope that lots of kids learn to use their imaginations in new ways as a result of exposure to it!
        There can be no surer way of instilling a love of reading & writing within them, than getting them involved in the processes early.
        Bravo,
        MARK6110

        www.lorissecrets.co.uk
        Mobile Hair & Beauty Treatments, Costa del Sol, Spain
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        • #5
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          Thanks Mark, maybe somehow I can fix it..Any One Ideas?
          Sharon Chajin

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          • #6
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            I have had another look and on balance No. 2 is better graphically.
            As for speeding it up, one of our many experts will need to have a look. But once it has downloaded it reloads very quickly.
            If it is for kids, I think they will wait just to see what unfolds. The slow download may actually prove to be a positive, in the end?
            MARK6110

            www.lorissecrets.co.uk
            Mobile Hair & Beauty Treatments, Costa del Sol, Spain
            www.princess-bride.co.uk
            Bridal hair and make-up service, Costa del Sol, Spain

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            • #7
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              Ha Ha Love your thinking!
              Sharon Chajin

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              • #8
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                I added another 1
                http://www.fastlincs.com/the-everlasting-story23.html
                Sharon Chajin

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                • #9
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                  Rohi has really good work , he has a gallery on one of the stores i shop at for my 3d stuff :) (dont take me as a jerk) just hope you got his permission to use it if you do use it :).
                  www.digitalenchant.com

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                  • #10
                    Re: Which page is Best

                    yep, it was free..So which one?
                    Sharon Chajin

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                    • #11
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                      i have to say rohi's , it just makes you think of a fairy tale and it has the falls/water is ever lasting or least makes you think of ever lasting :)
                      first one i dont like the text kind of fades in the picture coz it has to much color going on , 2nd one is nice , it looks from the image a fight evil vs good type deal.
                      www.digitalenchant.com

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                      • #12
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                        Thanks...Let me know if you need a link..
                        Sharon Chajin

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                        • #13
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                          I go with the Rohi's one now too. That's amazing fantasy art.
                          Best Regards,

                          Robert A. Kerr

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                          • #14
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                            Both are loading really slow.
                            To fix it would be my priority as people are not really patient...
                            Keep up with the good work!
                            Cheers,
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                            • #15
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                              I'm using this 1..Really slow to load? For me it is pretty quick!
                              Sharon Chajin

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