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    http://www.bridalbridal.com

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    You've outdone yourself, Ramsey!

    Excellent composition, execution, and tight logistical development. You demonstrate the epitome of the directed conclusion....subtle but precise!
    (That means you must be one h*** of a salesman! LOL)

    > Only one teensy nit-picking thing: look at your page transition carefully, and you will notice your copy in the top right box is maybe one-click different on each page....easy fix...simply note the X-Y axis registration on your Home page, and make corrections on each. DONE!

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    So elegant!
    I personally would change only a single word - shocked to surprised?

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    Hi Marincky,

    Tis a lovely website ..my only dissapointment was that it would have been nice to click on the photos and see an enlargment, as someone who looks at a lot of bridal websites the first thing i do is click to see a larger pic ...
    the navigation font could be a little larger..these tired old eyes dont like to squint lol

    Overall its a lovely looking site nice design ...but would love to see more gowns and more info on them ..

    Nice job well done
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    Nice one Ramsey!

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    Very nice,
    One suggestion, the elegance of your site might be improved (if that's possible) by moving "Designing....natural beauty" or softening the white background.

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    Quote Originally Posted by bill2006
    Very nice,
    One suggestion, the elegance of your site might be improved (if that's possible) by moving "Designing....natural beauty" or softening the white background.
    I agree with Bill on this and loved the sight....absolutely elegant and easy to navigate and loads fast. Agree with lincslady that a larger picture would be nice for us ladies who like details...
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    Love the site.. Very subtle.

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    Oh goody! My turn! LOL

    Great site Ramsey! It is elegant and sophisticated.

    I agree with much of the above.
    1. needs enlargments..................please....we chicks love to see details up close! the lace, the beadwork, the applique..all that stuff.

    2. The white box around "designing......" like Bill said sticks out weird. Perhaps white type and no white box, or a soften the edges of the box ..no, ditch the white box

    I love the red background....very unusual and yet just the right shade.

    Good job!
    still working on website!

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    Vasili says:
    You've outdone yourself, Ramsey!

    Excellent composition, execution, and tight logistical development. You demonstrate the epitome of the directed conclusion....subtle but precise!
    (That means you must be one h*** of a salesman! LOL)

    > Only one teensy nit-picking thing: look at your page transition carefully, and you will notice your copy in the top right box is maybe one-click different on each page....easy fix...simply note the X-Y axis registration on your Home page, and make corrections on each. DONE!

    You can be proud of this website, and others should see that the bar has been raised once again!


    Marincky Replies: Vasili my friend. I have no idea if this is good or bad as I can never find the words you use in the dictionary!!!! You always confuse me my friend, but I will take it as a huge compliment because it sounds nice. Thank you. P.s I changed the coordinates Captain.


    Mary H says:
    So elegant!
    I personally would change only a single word - shocked to surprised?


    Marincky Replies: Mary, You are an angel, Thank you x

    Lincslady says:
    Hi Marincky,

    Tis a lovely website ..my only dissapointment was that it would have been nice to click on the photos and see an enlargment, as someone who looks at a lot of bridal websites the first thing i do is click to see a larger pic ...
    the navigation font could be a little larger..these tired old eyes dont like to squint lol

    Overall its a lovely looking site nice design ...but would love to see more gowns and more info on them ..

    Nice job well done


    Marincky Replies: Lincslady, I have now made all pictures that I have larger pictures of Clickable. Thank you too for your kind words

    Bill & Bee

    Can't change the white background at the top now, unless the guy who made that image (yes it's an image) will redo it for nothing?. Thank you too for kind words.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lincslady
    Hi Marincky,

    Overall its a lovely looking site nice design ...but would love to see more gowns and more info on them ..

    Nice job well done
    I am making this company SIX websites, there will be at least one of them with more gowns on them, but they do over 600 different ones so probably won't do them all!!! But I'll make sure to show you the site that will have more on them when I have finished it. Might be a while!!
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    It looks Ace Ramsey! The white lines produce such a good effect. As a rule I really dislike having table colours that are the same as the background colour but in this case (because of the white lines) it works very well. I am temprorarily running a free banner creation thing. I could easily make a text banner to change that the white thing at the top for you? But... I think it looks looks good, it catches the eye.

    Personally I wouldn't change anything. contact me if you need to though.

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    Very nice looking site with good colours. 4 little points, when I went to your contact page there seems to be a red box covering part of what I believe is (any other comments field).
    It may be nice to have a contact us on each page (maybe in the menu area).
    The white box at the head of the page with your logo may look nice with a border the same colour as the Gino part of the logo. (or not?)
    On the page with contact us link there’s a real nice image of 2 girls that seems to have shifted down & to the right as if it has moved away from the writing.
    Maybe let other confer what I have said as some are only suggestions.
    (Using MS explorer) .

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    What an amazingly good looking site!!!!! I really like it alot! As a caterer we want to make sure we give a good impression the very first time and I am very impressed with your site and the contents. I actually went over all the pages.

    One thing I did notice is that once a perspective client goes to the contact page there is no link back to the home page or previous page (not sure if this was by design).

    Also, while browsing the differrent pages it only has an option to move forward or back the home page. You might want to add a previous page link as well so that the client has the option of going back a page to compare what you are offering.

    Other than that...super cudo's on a site that is "very" well designed!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by smcatering
    What an amazingly good looking site!!!!! I really like it alot! As a caterer we want to make sure we give a good impression the very first time and I am very impressed with your site and the contents. I actually went over all the pages.

    One thing I did notice is that once a perspective client goes to the contact page there is no link back to the home page or previous page (not sure if this was by design).

    Also, while browsing the differrent pages it only has an option to move forward or back the home page. You might want to add a previous page link as well so that the client has the option of going back a page to compare what you are offering.

    Other than that...super cudo's on a site that is "very" well designed!!!
    Thank you once again, your comments are wonderful and very encouraging to go do more!!

    I kind of purposely didn't do previous page buttons as there isn't really much to read ro much info to recover from previous pages. The idea is that they have one way out of the site.... through the contact form ; - )
    Purposely done to try to encourage some contact, but I may relook at it, not sure, can't decide.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Collectors-info
    Very nice looking site with good colours. 4 little points, when I went to your contact page there seems to be a red box covering part of what I believe is (any other comments field).
    I know, I just found that box was too uneccesarily big

    It may be nice to have a contact us on each page (maybe in the menu area).
    Was considering this, will probably change

    The white box at the head of the page with your logo may look nice with a border the same colour as the Gino part of the logo. (or not?)
    Can't change this unfortunately

    On the page with contact us link there’s a real nice image of 2 girls that seems to have shifted down & to the right as if it has moved away from the writing.
    Will check this out and redo thank you
    Maybe let other confer what I have said as some are only suggestions.
    (Using MS explorer) .

    Good luck.

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    Thank you Chris, Your comments are very much appreciated, as is everyone's. I do take them all on board thank you
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    Quote Originally Posted by FPRob
    It looks Ace Ramsey! The white lines produce such a good effect. As a rule I really dislike having table colours that are the same as the background colour but in this case (because of the white lines) it works very well. I am temprorarily running a free banner creation thing. I could easily make a text banner to change that the white thing at the top for you? But... I think it looks looks good, it catches the eye.

    Personally I wouldn't change anything. contact me if you need to though.
    Nearly everyone has mentioned about the right hand side of the banner looking too white so wondering whether or not to take up your kind offer Rob, what do you think?
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    The thing I am thinking mate is that if you change the white... Any other colour will look out of place and changing it to the same red (as the rest of the page) might create a LOT of blandness.

    Test it and see what you think... Take the image out, put the same text in as normal text with a red back ground... Just as a test so you can see how different it looks.

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    Good idea, I'll do that. I'm in Reading at the moment with my son so can't do anything until I get Home. Will try then
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