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    Hi I have had my site up since the end of June. I am still adding to it and changing things as I learn more. This is my first site and would appreciate any constructive comments from the members of the forum.
    Thanks Phil

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    Great site, Phil!

    You have the balance of Content and Design nailed down just right. Your nav logistics are ***** (love the dynamic menu system), and will benefit you greatly with how content will elevate relevancy ranking.

    And, not to mention your effectual reciprocal links (Calloway, etc.).

    Looking forward to your loading your content to see your style and refinements.

    > Only weak spot (in my opinion) is the Logo in the main header.....a simple font-style logo doesn't do the site justice....something developed along the lines (and colors?) of your sidebar image and your 'ads' would add much more character. Maybe pluck an arial pix of a course? destination? to add as a background for the same font header?

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    Agree with Vasili, nice layout, clean, ***** informative and to the point. A nice banner at the top would work wonders
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    Nice Site Phil,

    Couple of things to consider:
    -Center your pages. No slices you want the ball in the middle of the fairway.
    -The link "...are looking for golf equipment or golf" on home page doesn't work.

    Added your site to favorites.

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    Great job! I agree with the guys, a logo/splashier heading across the top would be a great finishing touch! FOUR!!!
    (ok, i'm not sure what that means, but it seemed to fit instead of Way to go!)
    still working on website!

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    Good job, my Dad would love your site.
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    Very nice..

    I am just wondering about 1 thing, the first link in your text area, 'golf equipment'.. it seems to take me back to the same page (Index), I'm wondering if that's the right destination, is it worth having the link..?

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    Looks very nice GG, really! I think one of the best ways to improve it would be to contain everything in a border or using a different background colour (but keeping the white table background) would also produce the same effect but....

    It is good as it is, even though there are no border borders everything looks snice and tight and together.

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    I can say, perfect for such an industry, golf is a classy sport and need classy branding, you did a great job, if you follow the tips above, it will be more perfect, and center the index page.

    What I can say man, WOW
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    Everybody's said all hte comments I noticed so I'll just say GREAT JOB. Lots of detail and obvious love of he sport ...will pass on to golf friends of mine.
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    Thanks to all of you who commented on my site, I will take all of your suggestions on board and try to implement them. Look out for the changes soon. Phil
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    Really good site. I can notice the information you would have gathered to put up on your site. Very patiently done!

    ("Golf Articles" -> "Cure Your Slice" page does not seem to work)

    Excellent Job!

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    You have a real nice website, very professional, lots of links, good layout. I like the tartans. Real good job.

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