Thread: First Night Nerves

Hello everyone,

Here is my site and I would love to hear your views. A few notes:
past work isn't finished yet and my webform isn't working (but I'll deal with that tomorrow I think).

www.spirited-events.com

Look forward to hearing your thoughts.

Thank you

I like it, well layed out and easy to navigate. The only bit I don't like is the way every page opens up in a new window. Otherwise a nice site, great for the weekend drinking sessions lol

Thanks Mook25, I have been wondering about the way the pages open and trying to decide how would be best so that's really helpful. The only thing is that I was worried that the menu changed once past the first pages (if you're with me) and I just didn't want to confuse anyone too much. I'll change it tomorrow and see what happens.

Weekend drinking sessions - lol - am thinking that perhaps I should add a page of hangover cures haha!

Thanks so much for looking

Looks wonderful! Neat layout. Your well on yourway to a fantastic site.


Andy

Very interesting. The only things I see immediately - is the need to have a link other than the 'dangling' ones on the home page - at first glance I was looking at it as the type of page where I needed to "enter". While I think everyone will figure it out - an easy solution would be to make the picture a link to a general page with all the links on it - maybe to a site map, even. Just an idea.

All the pages need better titles - using your keywords.

The cont services page has some text almost overlapping - which can be easily solved by moving the pics slightly. The 2nd services page also opened as a new page - which would make me leave your website. I don't do that - and it's not recommended within your own website (you do want to do it when it's a link to another website). Actually, I just discovered that on all the pages now - which means I didn't see any more pages - I do not want 100 pages open to the same website - and people browsing at work can't afford that. It also slows down their computers -

Great job - I like the colors and how you've done it - great eye you have. Now is tweaking.

Amazing.. really nice... good job.

Very creative use of images and layout....conveys versatile perspectives well (something of great demand in your offering, yes?).

I liked your use of "right-click deny".....whose script did you use?

In "About Us" there is the first instance of inadvertant text spacing (second body of text). This can be avoided in BV if you remember to simply add an extra 'space' after the last text you type.

To satisfy Beth's earlier mention of the Main Page Menu being difficult (a very valid point) you may simply wish to re-do the "buttons" having your text read vertically.
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And, personally, I prefer all windows in retail sites to open anew....I want my Main to be there after customer's drill in to find more. (It's the same amount of clicks to close windows as it is to "return" but it is the only sure-fire way to always have your Main be the last to exit). We all know how beneficial it is to keep your name in front as long as possible, right? I would agree though, that there must be a reasonable limit to this, possibly for sites under 10 pages, and for sites larger, then only certain "category" or "admin" page types...

And...I think if you tone down the pink tint a wee bit in your backgrounds, you will really get more of the "soothing" aspect you were seeking.

All in all, Great Job!

Sam

I like the pink and the dangles, but... Maybe they should be bigger, cuz like Beth, it took me a bit to figure out that was also your menu. I kept looking around for more.

And, I disagree with Vasili on the open pages in a new link. You only want to do that for pictures and links OFF your site. NOTHING annoys me more than popups and 500 windows. If I get there and find thats what they do, it will be the last time I am there. I'm not fond of POPUNDERS either.
You can captivate your audience without trying to trick them with each link opening in a new window. I'd rather keep their attention honestly, than annoy them and keep them there by ruse.

Karen

Thanks everyone, let me play with it a bit and get back to you. This is sooooooo brilliant, I am so glad that I found vodahost! You are all stars

Sam
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Originally Posted by Bethers

Very interesting. The only things I see immediately - is the need to have a link other than the 'dangling' ones on the home page - at first glance I was looking at it as the type of page where I needed to "enter". While I think everyone will figure it out - an easy solution would be to make the picture a link to a general page with all the links on it - maybe to a site map, even. Just an idea.

All the pages need better titles - using your keywords.

The cont services page has some text almost overlapping - which can be easily solved by moving the pics slightly. The 2nd services page also opened as a new page - which would make me leave your website. I don't do that - and it's not recommended within your own website (you do want to do it when it's a link to another website). Actually, I just discovered that on all the pages now - which means I didn't see any more pages - I do not want 100 pages open to the same website - and people browsing at work can't afford that. It also slows down their computers -

Great job - I like the colors and how you've done it - great eye you have. Now is tweaking.

Hi Beth,
I can't see where the text is overlapping on my services continued page, it seems fine from here, could you give me an idea please?
I am in the middle of changing all of my links I'm sure that all of you who have mentioned this will be pleased to hear!!!
My other question is how can I make my page titles better?
Thanks for your lovely comments. Unfortunately it' not all my own work, I bought a template a long time ago to use for this but have had to do a lot of work to change it to fit of course, the colours are our business colours, the business card and obviously the photos etc etc are all down to me.
Thanks Beth
Sam

Originally Posted by Vasili

Very creative use of images and layout....conveys versatile perspectives well (something of great demand in your offering, yes?).

I liked your use of "right-click deny".....whose script did you use?

In "About Us" there is the first instance of inadvertant text spacing (second body of text). This can be avoided in BV if you remember to simply add an extra 'space' after the last text you type.

To satisfy Beth's earlier mention of the Main Page Menu being difficult (a very valid point) you may simply wish to re-do the "buttons" having your text read vertically.
L
I
K
S.......

And, personally, I prefer all windows in retail sites to open anew....I want my Main to be there after customer's drill in to find more. (It's the same amount of clicks to close windows as it is to "return" but it is the only sure-fire way to always have your Main be the last to exit). We all know how beneficial it is to keep your name in front as long as possible, right? I would agree though, that there must be a reasonable limit to this, possibly for sites under 10 pages, and for sites larger, then only certain "category" or "admin" page types...

And...I think if you tone down the pink tint a wee bit in your backgrounds, you will really get more of the "soothing" aspect you were seeking.

All in all, Great Job!

Hi Vasili,
Thanks for looking at my site and for your comments, if you look at my reply to Beth you will see that I unfortunately cannot take all the credit - maybe one day eh?
I used a script from Aliens Anonymous, isn't it brilliant? If you like mine you'll 'love' Aliens, it's very funny.
Can I ask what you mean by inadvertant text spacing on my "about us" page?
Thanks so much again
Sam

P.S Thanks to all of you for all the lovely comments and for taking the time to take a look, it is much appreciated
xxx

Unfortunately, I can't check the overlapping as I can't open your site right now - I get a "Sphere" page which says to log in through the control panel???

As to page titles - make them have your keywords - be descriptive. For example, you wouldn't want "Home" for a title, but you could have Event Planning by Spirited Events (as I can't get on your site, this is just a memory thing - event planning might not be the best keyword or words to use) - take a look at some of our stores/sites for ideas. But USE the title to give the visitors and se's what they will actually find on each page.

Originally Posted by sam*****cat

Hi Vasili,
Thanks for looking at my site and for your comments, if you look at my reply to Beth you will see that I unfortunately cannot take all the credit - maybe one day eh?
I used a script from Aliens Anonymous, isn't it brilliant? If you like mine you'll 'love' Aliens, it's very funny. Thought so....I like his marvelously!
Can I ask what you mean by inadvertant text spacing on my "about us" page?
Thanks so much again
Sam

Sam-

If you look closely, the 'bottom lines' of text body drops lower than normal line-to-line spacing....and in BV when you compose text in a Text box, if after the last period (for example) you simply touch the spacebar one more time (adding an extra "space") your text 'body' won't reform downward as the Textbox tries to automatically create margins.
This eliminates what appears to be a "1.5" line spacing on the last line.

Just a little hinter I remember having torn my hair out...

Originally Posted by Bethers

Unfortunately, I can't check the overlapping as I can't open your site right now - I get a "Sphere" page which says to log in through the control panel???

As to page titles - make them have your keywords - be descriptive. For example, you wouldn't want "Home" for a title, but you could have Event Planning by Spirited Events (as I can't get on your site, this is just a memory thing - event planning might not be the best keyword or words to use) - take a look at some of our stores/sites for ideas. But USE the title to give the visitors and se's what they will actually find on each page.

Oh how weird! Why would that happen? It's ok here.

I am such a fool, I have figured out the page titles now, I was thinking of the names that I save the pages as and all of a sudden it dawned on me - der! Think I'm getting there with them now. Still think I have lots of work to do. I will be interested to see what you think of the titles once I have finished them, so long as I've got it right this time - haha!

Thanks as always

Sorry I keep on coming back but keep on finding myself with more questions. I have put an arrow and 'Click tags to navigate' next to my hanging tags on my home page, do you think this is a good idea? I was also wondering if it would be sensible to put my drop down menu on 'every' page? What do you all think?

Sam
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Hi Sam.
Your site is great fun. Got a couple of things:
On the Entertainment page, teh text at the bottom of the middle pic in the bottom row overlaps and is unreadable.
On the bar service page, the bottom site says "Bare Service" If that is waht you mean, cool, but if not, then maybe drop the 'e'
I personally like to keep one font throughout, and you seem to have fluctuated between like arial and soe other one. A nice clean sans font is easier to read.

And, finally, I like the suggestion about having your tags bigger, would make them easier to read.

Oh, and about the arrow thing. Well, it makes it easier to get around the site, but they sure seem plain after those cute tags.. but if you are goin to use it, put it on all pages, I say. It is always nice to know you can get back 'home' if you get lost in a site..

good site, I am enjoying it.

Liz

Liz

Originally Posted by larazovich

Hi Sam.
Your site is great fun. Got a couple of things:
On the Entertainment page, teh text at the bottom of the middle pic in the bottom row overlaps and is unreadable.
On the bar service page, the bottom site says "Bare Service" If that is waht you mean, cool, but if not, then maybe drop the 'e'
I personally like to keep one font throughout, and you seem to have fluctuated between like arial and soe other one. A nice clean sans font is easier to read.

And, finally, I like the suggestion about having your tags bigger, would make them easier to read.

Oh, and about the arrow thing. Well, it makes it easier to get around the site, but they sure seem plain after those cute tags.. but if you are goin to use it, put it on all pages, I say. It is always nice to know you can get back 'home' if you get lost in a site..

good site, I am enjoying it.

Liz

Liz

Hi Liz,

Thanks so much for your comments. I am really glad that you are enjoying it! That's what our business is all about so I'm so glad it's translating that way - wicked!

I am steadily working my way through everything and although I think 'bare' services might be fun I have changed it back to bar services, perhaps we will think about adding that service later - haha!

Watch this space!

Thansk again

Sam

You've got a good looking site and shows a lot of creativity. I think YOUR creativity probably ism what you should let lead you, so far it is a great idea and really like the layout. Some of the things mention for change really aren't that big of a deal and are things that would probably have been changed before the final work had been done. I didn't see any overlapping, maybe you corrected it, and Bare service sounds promising, I'll be back.

Thanks chocco,

Your site looks amazing, think I'll have to save up and come visiting. What beautiful pictures, it certainly makes me want to jump on a plane right now!

lol - bare services, yes keep checking back, I think we should see what we can offer there, maybe some 'bare' bartenders haha!

Sam

Originally Posted by sam*****cat

lol - bare services, yes keep checking back, I think we should see what we can offer there, maybe some 'bare' bartenders haha!

I would think there would be an extra charge for that, wouldn't there?
(Batchelorette Parties, Divorce Parties, Wednesday Nights, etc.) LOL

Kewllllll site for sure ... I just see a bit more overlapping on your "What We Do" page ... like someone said just reduce the size of your image and your text will be okay, it is the text that is below the image I am referring to ....

Great Job!!
Awesome recipies

very nicely done

Sam,

Looked at your site again and I like it still, maybe more than before. The only poroblem is there is a pink thick vertical line in middle of page YUM YUM. Loved the fotos
nice work designs and foto page. Thank, come visit anytime. Didn't see any listing for Bare Services yet, darn...............

Originally Posted by Vasili

I would think there would be an extra charge for that, wouldn't there?
(Batchelorette Parties, Divorce Parties, Wednesday Nights, etc.) LOL

Hehehehe! I think we're definitely onto something here, gonna put my thinking cap on and see what we can come up with. All suggestions very welcome LOL

Originally Posted by LadyEye

Kewllllll site for sure ... I just see a bit more overlapping on your "What We Do" page ... like someone said just reduce the size of your image and your text will be okay, it is the text that is below the image I am referring to ....

Great Job!!
Awesome recipies

Thanks LadyEye,
Have you tried any recipes yet? Make sure you've got the morning after to recover, they're a bit more-ish. Will sort out the 'What We Do' page, golly, so much weaking to do and then I found out about all the work involved with the se's - phewwwwwwwwwwy! Fun though eh!!! Lucky I like to learn!!!

Originally Posted by choco777

Sam,

Looked at your site again and I like it still, maybe more than before. The only poroblem is there is a pink thick vertical line in middle of page YUM YUM. Loved the fotos
nice work designs and foto page. Thank, come visit anytime. Didn't see any listing for Bare Services yet, darn...............

Hey Choco,

I wonder what that weird thick pink line is in yum yum, how bizarre! Will have to look into that. Thanks for looking again and thanks even more for liking it more, I seem to be constantly learning new stuff and then I feel that I have to update it so I seem to be doing an awful lot of that right now as well as learning about se's, blimey, there's more to this website thing than you realise isn't there but have to say I'm enjoying it immensely.

Keep on looking for the 'bare services' it's certainly looking like it could be a popular service, hey, maybe that would whizz me to the top of the se's, hmmm, on second thoughts maybe I wouldn't want to be in 'that' type of subject LOL

I like your site, very interesting layout.
Why don't you make the buttons with a rollover effect making it look like the tabs are being pulled down on roll-over and click?

Chris Cross

Hi Sam, Great site! Being a singer myself I am very familiar with agents and event managers for myself. Your site is the best I have seen of the industry so far.

I did come across a spelling mistake in the drop-menu... the link for "the amazing bike of delicious delights" it says "fo" instead of "of"... thought you should know.

Congratulations, here's to your sucess.

Mandy

Just have to say... I looked at your specialty ice-cream page... I am drooling at the mouth wanting some, but I couldn't have any even if I wanted to. What a cruel thing to see for a pregnant woman like me. Maybe I could get some when I can have alcohol again... Yuuuuuummmm!