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    Machiavelli is offline Sergeant Major
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    This site is my 2nd and hot on the heels of my 1st which I published a couple of days ago

    www.myworldspanish.com

    Is page size ok, as this was an issue before. Some pages are not complete yet but getting there.

    All feedback and suggestions welcome

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    Very very good.

    You are a quick learner - have a good title and used the h1 tags. I'm very impressed.

    Some will say you shouldn't go wider than 800 - but I'm fine with the width as you have it now.

    Good job.

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    Thanks bethers, and thanks for your help before with the keyword etc... and real eye opener.

    ...standing on the shoulders of giants

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    nicely done...liked the colors and the width is fine. The spanishcourses.html link does't work. Good Luck

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    Yeah the Spanish Courses is an affiliate program page i haven't finished yet, so should be working v soon

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    Lot of work and very quick.
    -Pages seem to work fine.
    -The logo needs some work, because of the dark red background, there is a fuzzy white edge around it. Use Paint.Net, PhotoShop, etc to save for the web or save with a transparent background. It will really stand out.
    -Page: http://www.myworldspanish.com/spanishandtheworld.html, Spanish is actually spoken by close to 400 million people including Spain and the USA, and in over 25 countries.

    Overall both your pages are very very nicely done.

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    I agree with you about the logo. The white around the writing etc.. But until now I did know how to remedy it as it was a free logo design software, and I was entering it as HTML

    The Paint.net program is great. I think the logo looks a lot *****er now after a bit of tweaking.

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    I like how you have cloned the template for each page, the only thing i would say is you could have a slight variation in colour or outlay to let browsers know they have changed page?
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    Nice clear site. The titles across the top look like they should be links. Your cantact page could be made a mailto link

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    Quote Originally Posted by Machiavelli
    ...think the logo looks a lot *****er now after a bit of tweaking.
    Big improvement, looks ***** now. Try doing the same for the globe.

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