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    warwickplates is offline Sergeant
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    Wink Please review me

    A simple page, but do take a look. any feedback would be useful.

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    Default Re: increase your sales

    Just a comment - all caps is considered shouting - your entire home page is in caps - it works for emphasis here and there - like bolding - but not for all text.

    Also, the lighter blue text is harder to read - and you need some variables - all the boxes look the same - nothing to bring my eye to one or another.

    I'd like to see some sort of header - and some headlines on the page. The page itself needs to either be aligned to the far left of the screen or centered on the screen - not haphazard in between :)

    Good start - I look forward to seeing where you go with it.

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    Wow, that page took forever to load.
    Agree with Bethers, very hard to read.

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    i couldn't agree more with bethers.

    DO NOT USE ALL CAPS EVERYWHERE IN UR WEBSITE.

    NEVER.
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    but yeah, ur have a good design layout.

    :)
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    Yup take the advise from beth she knows what she talking about trust me she and the rest helped me on my ghost hunters site .

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    Listen to Beth
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    warwickplates is offline Sergeant
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    Default Re: Please review me

    Hi everyone thanks for the info. Yep not sure why I did the whole site in upper case. I have made some changes, and am playing around with the rest. Not sure why it took so long to load, or why the page is off centre, as it looked and loaded ok on my PC, but I will look into it. Thanks again.

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