Hi,
http://masterpac.com
is just about finished. I have a few photos to insert and to publish the "internal" pages for Naval's form pages.
All criticism is taken as positive. Fire Away!!!
Thanks
Terry
Hi,
http://masterpac.com
is just about finished. I have a few photos to insert and to publish the "internal" pages for Naval's form pages.
All criticism is taken as positive. Fire Away!!!
Thanks
Terry
CarbonTerry
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As much as I'm against "Welcome to" - I'll admit it's not bad how you're doing it- if you change it to "Welcome to MasterPac".
I like how easy the page is to see - and to navigate. EXCEPT there is no link to the home page. I had trouble navigating back to it. I believe you need to add that as your first link on the left ones.
Your home page shouldn't have that title at all - as that's the title of the product page - where it does fit. How about changing the home page title to "MasterPac - Thermoformed Plastic Packaging"
Also - you have the same title on other pages. YOu need to get that corrected. I didn't look at your meta, but hope you have done that differently for each page. Every page has to have it's own title, description, etc - they should not repeat. That will hurt you.
You've done a great job - I like the simplicity - now it's tweaking!
Thanks for pointing things out. I have not done meta's yet and I need to properly title the pages.
The "Welcome" is by the owners request. The customer is usually right.
The logo is linked to the home page. I will have to think about that problem.
Thanks again.
CarbonTerry
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I found that the logo was linked, but most customers won't. Can you suggest to the customer the re-wording of the Welcome - it would behoove them to change that :)
And, in webdesign, if the customer was always right, they'd be getting the traffic they wanted - and not paying other people to design and do the work. I listen to customers, but I don't ever tell them they're always right in this instance. In fact, when I'm hired, I let them know that I'll fight them tooth and nail on some things.
"usually" should have been in ""s
CarbonTerry
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Looks Great. I love the color scheme you have chosen and the logo/header. I see you still have a little work to do on the title pages. Easy to navigate, interesting content. Great Job!
Cindy Smentowski
Thank you Dream Lady
CarbonTerry
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Anyone?
CarbonTerry
Semper Fi
Still green...still mean......just not as lean
Red Hawk Archery
Zone 5 Photo
My USMC
Hi CarbonTerry
The site looks great! Besides the other comments above, your Blister link on the Products page doesn't work.
I liked the colors, lay out looks good. Easy to navigate. Do you do personalized logos? I looked but didn't see anything about it.
I wish you luck and prosperity.
Jolen
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Very clean web design.
You have just the right balance of info-Content to technology on your Main/index page, and each interior page supports with tightly composed relevancy as well.
Beyond professionally simplistic, I believe you have preserved more than the minimal "personality" in this commercial site than is seen at first glance, and is worth congratulating you on......you have successfully achieved what many others cannot begin to appreciate.
uuuuuhh...wow...thanks
CarbonTerry
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