Thread: Honest Criticism

I have a chain of websites I am developing for advertising and online malls . It has been hard for me to choose as my primary site to introduce my mall to customers. By the way, thanks to Blue Voda - It did all the work ! Any suggestions and help ? http://buckeyewebpages.com/beautystores.html

Nothing there, except a phone at the bottom.

Hi le

Like bill said nothing shows up, have you done the right spelling?

I had the same result: after it downloaded Adobe Flash Player for me, it was still barren apart from a few buttons at the bottom :(

cheers

Will

The flash showed well on my computer but showed blank on others. Thanks for letting me know. I 've fixed that problem and hope to hear more from you guys . Great to be a part !

OK, I get to the page now - but why would I want to be there? I have no clue what it does and I actually stayed to watch the text change. If I'm supposed to know that this page takes me to something else, I didn't learn it or have any reason to want to go there.

Sorry.

I don't understand what your page is supposed to do. I did click on the other links and it brought me to other pages, but your initial page needs some work. There is no title tellling me what page I have landed on and what it is supposed to do. The links flash in and out - I assume each one is supposed to bring me to a different web page.

If you want to have a picture on your site, have something that suits your content. I am not sure if what you have right now is appropriate.

-Buddysmom