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    Review this site for me.

    www.mastersoven.com

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    Hi, looking good. I'm not staying to long! Just put on 5lbs checking the site out.
    Sites looking real nice. Not sure if the home page should be named master oven or not?
    & the contact us is the second button, which on most of sites is normally the last.
    But all is looking great. But I’m off before I get tempted.

    Cheers.

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    Default Re: Check This Site Out For Me Guys

    Hey Muzicman

    The look of your site is good but you need to move things around a bit because you have a few Text areas overlapping with pictures. ie the Toll free number and the navigation bar. The header text overlaps with the picture. You also have some text overlapping at the bottom of the page with the other Nav Bar.

    Overall though well done!!!

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    your subheadings are covering the Toll-Free number. Check it again.Overall it is very colorful

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    Default Re: Check This Site Out For Me Guys

    Thanks, I'll make the adjustments as you mentioned. I'm shocked to see that my olive green shapes aren't showing up olive at all. There is a tall shape behind the little stack horizontal bars. The shape is olive in BV and even in the preview. Now that it is published, it's some other crazy color.

    Anybody got any ideas how I can fix this?

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    Hi, just another idea. The green part that is not showing up? Sometimes the images won’t load when visiting a site. I have found the page loads quicker if tables are used instead of shapes & do away with the boarders & use a colour background.
    A lot of the page looks fine on my screen in firefox. So maybe worth checking them in a couple of browsers.
    Cheers.

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    I haven't worked with table before.
    How do you get color background in the table?
    It looks like it just receives html code.

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    Your buy now buttons are not working !!
    otherwise, its looking good................................

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    I avoid using more tables than necessary - they are bulky to se's - but sometimes are needed.

    To be honest, all those olive bars on the left? I was looking for navigation to be on them. They just seem like a real waste of space and actually detracted from the design for me.

    I'd change the navigation name "make order" to "products" at least. Make order - I expected to see a generic order sheet and I wasn't sure where to go to find the products.

    The lovely pumpkin roll on the home page needs to be clickable to the product.

    I'm very lucky - cuz your pictures are mouth-watering - but neither item are foods that would get me :)

    I agree that the product page needs to be moved to be immediately after your home page. You want people to go there and order.

    You need to work on the page titles - you url doesn't belong there - I suggest you read my little beginners e-book for some help there.

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    The shading on the gift cert. pic is nice but the family flowers pic has improper shading and the main pic heavenly pumpkin has no shading. I think if you fix those two pics they should pop off the page better.

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    Agree with the " make order " page not being what is expected, looks good. I like the colors and layout, nice start.

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    I was also looking for the bars on the left to be nav bars and felt a bit lost when the weren't. I like the look and your color selection. I am sitting here asking my wife if she could make me a Heavenly Pumkin Roll for dinner...mmmmmmmm

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    ok now I am hungry...There goes the diet. Good site!

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