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    karry123 is offline Staff Sergeant
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    Wink website needs reviewed please

    Hello,

    I would love some feedback on any or all issues of my site please.
    Thank all of you for your feedback that I have recieved so far.

    Thank you,
    Karrye
    www.joyofit.org

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    Default Re: website needs reviewed please

    I like the look of it.
    First thing I notice, however, is that there seems to be no way to navigate.. then I scrolled down and found the enter button.
    I would be inclined to click away thinkng there was only just this page. Dunno about others, but for me having the navigation up to is easier to find.
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    Default Re: website needs reviewed please

    ditto - navigation buttons on both pages need to be seen easier - right away otherwise - colors good, site is centered.

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    Default Re: website needs reviewed please

    Thank you very much for your comments, I will relocate my navigation buttons and republish again.

    Thank you!
    Karrye
    www.joyofit.org

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    Default Re: website needs reviewed please

    Your links now work.
    A suggestion: you've placed two "Enter" buttons, one for your site and the second for BV/VH. Consider eliminating the latter. Users will click on the BV/VH banner.

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    Default Re: website needs reviewed please

    Thank you Bill2006
    Did the button I changed to a darker gold look better?

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    Default Re: website needs reviewed please

    Since you only have a couple pages - and it's really all one sales letter - I'd combine the two pages and have one longer page.

    You might want to consider having other pages with other informative info, though.

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    Default Re: website needs reviewed please

    Thank you Beth. I will start working on that asap.
    I have the bv banner on the first page and had a enter buton there, I am not sure where to copy and paste the info to get the banner to work in my site, same as the others. I just copied the banners and made a nav button for them. I know that's not done correctly(but it worked) Can you tell me where to copy and paste this info to get them to work properly?
    Thanks again,
    Karry
    www.joyofit.org

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    karry123 is offline Staff Sergeant
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    Default Re: website needs reviewed please

    I have redone my website and look forward to any responses. I but a bv banner in my site but am not sure where to copy and paste the info for it to show up . I copy and pasted the banner but not the info. I am not sure where to copy and paste it.
    Thank you,
    Karry
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