Thread: My Newest Design

www.mypersonaloffice.biz is my infant web design. Please check it out let me know what you think.

Think your pages would look better if they were centered. You can easily do this on page properties. Just make sure the page width is under 1000 so that the page does center. Site looks good. You might want to play with different size or style fonts for the titles to attract the eye more.
Good work,

Marcie

I agree your pages would look better centered, I love what you are doing........Good Job

Hi, Simple & to the point.
1.On the pages that need passwords it may be nice to have a drop down menu some ware else on the page for all of these that starts with login.
2.Would be also nice to have a website page that gives the info rather than a 401 on fail of login. This can be done in your c panel.
3. The forum menu is not on all pages.
4. The home button links to the flash start page & maybe better going to http://www.mypersonaloffice.biz/menu.html
5.The titles on the link page above are mostly underlined & may look better in just bold. They can tend to look like links otherwise.
6. The image on this page may look better as proper text. Looks a little hazy at the moment.
7. You have a flash header on each page that loads ever time you enter the page. It maybe nice to have this set up as once per browsing session. (I am looking for a script for this myself). It’s a little distracting when it loads every time.

Good luck.

Looks good.
Personally not a big fan of the fade in fade out effect. Your clients will be the best judge.
Good luck.

Thank you very much folks, for giving me your sincere critiques. I am working on bettering the site as we speak...or write. I hope you will continue to check back as I am taking each and every one of your suggestions.

Mapillar

Ok, the following changes were made
1. centered pages
2. removed the login sections from the nav. bar and put them in a dropdown menu
3. put like contents on different pages at the same margins.
4. bolded the lists on menu/home page
5. changed the font and size of the titles.
6. thinking about changing the 401 page, but how do I do that, David?

Thanks for all your comments. They truely helped me to improve my site

David? In cpanel it gives you the info under “Error pages” to change this.
Its all looking a lot better.

Chris!!! sorry about that. why did I think David? is there a david on this forum? Really, truly sorry about that.

I agree with the comments above. You have a very good start. If I was looking for a virtual assistant I would want to see a page of services that you offer with the pricing listed for each. You need to remember that these folks are swamped or they wouldn't be looking for help. Make it easy for them to find it. Spending a lot of time on your site trying to find the pertinent information will have them fleeing to another site.
Good luck!

Ok Dori. That's a very good idea. I'll talk to my client about that.