Thread: Please comment my web

Hi there, please tell me what do you think about my new web.

www.tanzania-zanzibar-dar-es-salaam-hotels.com.

I am using this domain-name to promote my hotel.

Alas

Its rather a long domain name but when you get there its worth it.

I like the way you have used your photos and the intro from black and white to full color was great.

I found myself wishing that I was there, and thats coming from a guy who lives on the sea................

Your contact link took me to a prices page and your reservations link/page
allowed me to submit a blank form.

You may want to consider using a simple PHP script to check that the relevant fields have been entered. If you are interested contact me.....

Good luck with your Hotel.

P.S. Any discounts for the Vodahost Family ???

Hi DAVIDUNDALICIA, thak you very much for your comments.
I tried to contact you, but no success.
Of course the vodahost family can get a discount.
Ciao
Alas

OK alas, try the contact form at any of my other sites list below.........

Hi Alas,

It is beautiful and I want to go........Now! If you want a plug on my site I'd be happy to put you in Hot Getaways.

www.thebarefoottraveler.com

We will be doing TV commercials soon.

Thank you Sharon , it will be nice to be on your web.
Also I would like to link your web in to my. I need to create a page where I can put all usefull links any suggestions?
I am staring a new web, which it will be only for advertisments in Tanzania, but I will link webs like yours free of charge, if you agree.
Saluti
Alas

Beautifully done! Im not the best expert on SEO topics, but you're seems user friendly. Those are some of the most beautiful pictures I've seen in a while! A++++

Thank you very much ACONSTAS1.
It si very nice to hear from others what they think about your job, especially when they like what you have done.
Ciao
alas

Nice work,
A couple of things you might want to take care of:
-Intro page: Use Upper case for "hotel" if that is the name of the complex.
-Wines: Origine and Origin on same page makes it appear that you have mispelled the word.
-Menus: (they look delicious) the text for prawns is difficult to read over the image. Red text on red image. Also, "homemade" is one word.
-Try to avoid the horizontal scroll, see this page

Thank you for the discount offer, good luck.

Alas: Very nice. I love the way you have your photos fade in to a nice crisp colorful image. Just beautiful. You have done a wonderful job. I have bookmarked your site for clients I have that enjoy visiting Africa.
Cindy

Alas,

Very nice site. I too like the way you fade your pictures in and out. Like the others, wish I was there. Keep up the great work!

What a wonderful location, the trees with the red flowers (?)
are the exact trees we have surrouding our property here, wurprised to find them in Tanzania. Your site is Great, everthing I tried seem to work, received what was expected.
Congratulations and Good Luck!

nice web site and very nice place

Hi to all of you.
Thank you a lot for your comments.
I will follow your advises.
Ciao
Alas

Originally Posted by davidundalicia

Its rather a long domain name but when you get there its worth it.

I like the way you have used your photos and the intro from black and white to full color was great.

I found myself wishing that I was there, and thats coming from a guy who lives on the sea................

Your contact link took me to a prices page and your reservations link/page
allowed me to submit a blank form.

You may want to consider using a simple PHP script to check that the relevant fields have been entered. If you are interested contact me.....

Good luck with your Hotel.

P.S. Any discounts for the Vodahost Family ???

Hi David,
thank you again for your help.
I have use the contac form you have suggested me, which is in one of your web.
I do not understand this part of it :
Quote
Now SAVE this file in the following manner:
Select "file"
Select "save as"
Select "files of type" and change to "ALL Files"
(Above step is most important)
Select "save"
..................................................
Thats the hard part done..............
STEP 3 :
........
Now all you have to do is to open your BlueVoda FTP program (or any FTP program)
and upload "processingpage.php" to your public.html directory.....................
First when I save following your instructions I still have the zip Icon.
I have open the cpanel to upload the file, but I do not understand what I have to do, because i can see ftp accounts etc...
I am very confuse, can you help understanding this final step?
I will really appreciate it.
Ciao
Alas

hey there, looking good. looks clean and professional. The only bit i'm not too keen on is, as david said, the long domain name. It's not a catchy one that people will remember and if they do they've got to remember how to spell it and where to add the dashes. You'd be better off getting a new one and shortening it. To save wasting your current domain you could point it to the new one.

Hi Mook25,
I actually have another which yesterday I made it as the exact copy of this one, but the name is www.mediterraneotanzania.com.
I need the other long domainame because has in it all the keywords which customers are using to search for an hotel in Tanzania.
Thanks
P.S. Any idea how to publish on ftp program David's form?

Hi there,
There is some really elegant design work here. Your pages are clean, visually very appealing and impart information is a direct and simple way, and no scrolling which is fantastic (well not on my screen although looking at your page source it does look as if your page width is 900px which is a shame: 780 would have been better). With some niggles ironed out, as mentioned by others, this is high class. My niggles:1) do not date your images in your gallery page. The photos are not date dependant and may impart a feeling that the site is not often revised. 2) Your entrance to the site page: there really is too much going on. People just need to click on the appropriate language and move on. I suggest you keep it to a few good static colour images without the black and white to colour business. Remember; just because you can do it does not mean you should (remember all the indiscriminate use of flash a few years ago. 3)Some of your pages are not properly centered in the browser window. 4) It would be nice to have a page about yourself and the history of the hotel etc. Whether or not it a family run business and so on. Sell yourselves as well as the location.
This is all meant to be constructive and I hope you take it as so. You never know, if the hotel falls on hard times you may have a second career as a web designer!
Regards, James.

Originally Posted by alas

Hi Mook25,
I actually have another which yesterday I made it as the exact copy of this one, but the name is www.mediterraneotanzania.com.
I need the other long domainame because has in it all the keywords which customers are using to search for an hotel in Tanzania.
Thanks
P.S. Any idea how to publish on ftp program David's form?

Alas, you dont PUBLISH the processing.php file
you should use the BV FTP program as outlined in the instructions.

for help with the ftp program, have a look at the vodahost FTP video tutorial, and everything will be a lot clearer.......

If you still have problems, email me at the address within the instructions....

Ok David ,
Thank you again
Alas

Hi Alas,

I'm ready whenever you are. Do you want me to just pluck it off your site?

i am agreeing with all the above. it looks very good. and not to sound like i am copying anyone(lol) yea i wish i was there.
great job.

brandin

Hi Sharon, I have put your web link on my index page.
Check it out if you like it, and let me know.
Saluti
Alas

Hi Alas, please send me your logo so I can place you in Hot Getaways.

siti@bellsouth.net

My friend that is great but you might want to start a links page, I love it but I shouldn't be on your front page....Also when you set up the link..set it up so it comes up as a separate page by using the blank link. You don't want them to completely leave your site....OK?

Hi Sharon,
I had followed your suggestions.
I have a link page now : http://www.tanzania-zanzibar-dar-es-...nia-links.html
Here I placed your web link.
If you like to link my site, can you link this other one ?
It is the exact copy of the above one, but I do not have the link page ( I had no enough time)
www.mediterraneotanzania.com
Thank you
Ciao
Alas

Hi Sharon how can I send you my logo?
Which email can I use?
Alas

You may wish to review your textual Content to be sure you have added the extra "space" after your last typed character in every textbox, which will prevent your last line of text presenting as if set at 1.5 line spacing.

(ex. "...if the last line has text composed properly, add the space!_" seen in red for illustrative purposes -- of course, it will be 'invisible')

Very visually attractive site.
Very fine use of the constructs, and the minute refinements of spacing and alignments are trivial compared to the efforts you've made to properly plan and compose a richly designed site.
It is now time you re-apply your focus on advancing preparations for Search Engine compliance to attain the results you deserve.

Thank you very much Vasili, I will follow your advise, I am trying to understand the whole search engine thinking, there is a lot to learn, also soo many different ideas of how to get a high ranking.
Any suggestions?
Saluti a te Generalissimo
Alas

Well I got one also on "TOMATO POLITICS" see my homepage.

hi there
nice looking website but when i go to the gallery to see rooms there are no pictures of the rooms and the bar etc but i think that the site is lovely
wish i was there
james