Thread: Please Critique

Please let me know what you think.

Thank you!

Juliann
http://juliannnewton.com/

Hi Julianne,

For me, I am the kind of person that gets visually overwhelmed easily, and there is a lot of good stuff to see on your site, but I can't process it because it is crowded - a lot of stuff in one place. My understanding is that current web wisdom speaks of having enough white space around your information that people can absorb smallish amounts of information at a time.

I feel hesitant to say all of this, as I am a relative newbie to this whole process, but this is just my opinion. Take it with grains of salt, and keep on goin'!

All the best!

Hi, needs a bit of direction & order to the page. It maybe better to have your top 10 on 10 different pages and then be able to have each page as specific area of your top items. That would leave the front page as a nice introduction to your site. You need to get the images down to a reasonable kb size. This one is http://juliannnewton.com/pretty%20girl%20drawing.bmp is about 550kb & should be about 30kb You also have a nice picture of yourselves & have used to tags on the side of the image on your BV page to make it smaller. (You now look a bit fuzzy)If you are creating a heading text to a part of the page it’s not that good to underline as most visitors will think they maybe links.

I see you fixed your bulleted list issue...

a couple of your pink dividing lines run through your words when you view your page with Firefox Im not sure if you intended for them to view that way or not.

Oh yes, dont forget to title your pages.