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    Cool new extreme sports site to peruse

    hello everyone.
    please can you have a look at this site and give opinion, it is not completely finished so please bear this in mind! please be critical but also please give an explaination to an alternatives of what has been done. this is a first attempt to webbuilding without any previous knowledge whatsoever.

    thanks
    http://www.bulgariaextreme.com/index.php
    thanks for all your help!

    Dive Daisy

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    Very nice Dive Daisy. Gorgeous layout, tons of information. Really good looking site!

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    wow, well done, congrats

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    Default Re: new extreme sports site to peruse

    Quote Originally Posted by dive daisy
    hello everyone.
    please can you have a look at this site and give opinion, it is not completely finished so please bear this in mind! please be critical but also please give an explaination to an alternatives of what has been done. this is a first attempt to webbuilding without any previous knowledge whatsoever.

    thanks
    http://www.bulgariaextreme.com/index.php
    This is a lovely site. It loads well, is easy to navigate, has a lot of information.. It is an amazing accomplishment for a first timer, or even an experienced site maker. well done.

    Couple of questions - You call this an extreme sports site; it feels more like an extreme vacation site.
    Are you marketing these vacations as extreme sports vacations? If so, that could be emphasized a bit more.

    The verbage on the frontpage is alittle awkward - I think maybe be sure to use complete sentences rather than fragments. (The only website you will need to refer to .. could be This is the only website..etc.)
    This is the paragraph you really want to grab your customer, so it should be slick and crisp..

    Consider why you think Bulgaria is a better choice than anywhere else, and talk about that a bit. Is it better priced than another place? Is there more to do? Is the weather better? Is it less crowded?
    These are the kinds of things you could highlight in bullet points.. just a thought.
    Anyways, great site. Good job.

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    Nice work,
    Ditto above comments by Liz, add spell check; on the right of your screen "Backcountry" is mispelled "...rty"
    -Went to 'booking-airport transfer' and lost your page. No way of going back as the browser's back did not work. Same thing for several other pages where it appears that you link to third party websites. Might want to make them open in separate windows. Use "_blank" in the links section.

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    Default Re: new extreme sports site to peruse

    Good Stuff
    Sharon Chajin

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    Nice pictures on the top!

    Problem: when you go in "Locations" then "Sofia", then you choose:
    "places to see"
    "pubs and restaurants"
    "shopping"

    None of these 3 links above seem to work. It's coming up error "404 Not Found"

    Cheers

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    Thanks for all your help, i am gradually going through all points taken.
    thanks NZBR these parts of the web have just not been done yet, i think i said this at the start of the forum, will hopefully be finished by tuesday and will publish it again lol. hopefully the gallery with jalbum is put on today if you keep your eyes peeled.

    thanks for all your help.
    thanks for all your help!

    Dive Daisy

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