Thread: Please review my updated site

Hi again,

I've incorporated the changes recommended in my first post here. Does the revised site improve upon the first sufficiently?
Please comment - I would love to hear your views.

www.fimbarbados.com

Fimbar

I took a quick look at it and it is very nice and well thought out. I would love to rent one, haha

looking good ... much easier to read and loading much quicker .... well done ...

Nice site. Easy to read and nagivate.

Cheers,

Hi Fimbar,

Looks like a wonderfull place and the site with a tweek or two will do it justice...
Reduce the actual size of your pictures to increase load speed (they are twice the actual usage size)
2) The fancy text used in your side nav bar is difficult to read.
3) Consider writing in "3rd party" or use "our we I etc" as little as posible, as people are flooded with "pie in the sky" advertising eg.
Welcome to our beautiful...
4) Maybe a "what's close by or activities in the area" page, as I alway's look at how I'm going to keep the family busy.
5) Maybe a "facilities on offer page" as you seem to have it all (cocktail bar, sundowner deck, swimming pool, tennis courts etc)

Looks Great,

listen to PlayItByBeer, he knows what he is speaking of. Your site looks good, keep up the good work.

Hi,

Thanks to you all for your time and advice. I'll incorporate your latest ideas and then list with a sales site. Hope I can repay the favour sometime.

Thanks again.

Fimbar

www.fimbarbados.com

Thanks for the offer Fimbar, if it suits the other topic contributors, we will all arrive on the 6 July 2007... LOL

Jokes aside, you have a slice of magic and your site is well on its way to promoting this, by turning a website visitor into a customer.
Cheers