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    David_A is offline Corporal
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    Default Hi, Need some feedbacks on few land pages

    Hello,

    I need some fedbacks about land pages i made for a few products.
    please said everything on your mind, thanks.
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    http://*****-party8.pcandvg.com

    ***** party video game for wii console
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    http://***********3.pcandvg.com

    *********** 3 console.
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    http://www.pcandvg.com/wii.html

    intendo wii console
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    thanks, david.
    israeli_oracle******.com

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    Default Re: Hi, Need some feedbacks on few land pages

    http://www.pcandvg.com/*****party8_w.html
    Liked this one. Feels professional. Like the idea of the style buttons.

    http://www.pcandvg.com/***********3.html
    Personally I am not sure on this one. This part http://www.pcandvg.com/***********_3.html the smaller images need physically need shrinking without using the handles on the image.

    http://www.pcandvg.com/wii.html
    Colours are fine, just needs the page to be not quite so wide.

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    micheleros is offline Master Sergeant
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    Default Re: Hi, Need some feedbacks on few land pages

    No. 1 looks really well, like that one alot. The only small thing is like no. 3. the first thing are ads....maybe consider putting them down the RHS of the page?

    No. 2. I intitally didn't like it but kept going back because it's kind of quirky!

    No. 3. Can you put a heading or something up top....the first thing you see are two google ads. Also the page looks too wide and the body isn't centred.

    Hope this was ok.

    Michele

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    David_A is offline Corporal
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    Default Re: Hi, Need some feedbacks on few land pages

    thanks both of you.

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    Default Re: Hi, Need some feedbacks on few land pages

    Hi ... must admit I totally agree with the other comments ... really loved the first one ... not sure about the second or the third ones ... good luck wiht it all

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    micheleros is offline Master Sergeant
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    Default Re: Hi, Need some feedbacks on few land pages

    No problem David A,

    Anytime.

    Michele

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