Thread: Hi, Need some feedbacks on few land pages

Hello,

I need some fedbacks about land pages i made for a few products.
please said everything on your mind, thanks.
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http://*****-party8.pcandvg.com

***** party video game for wii console
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http://***********3.pcandvg.com

*********** 3 console.
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http://www.pcandvg.com/wii.html

intendo wii console
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thanks, david.
israeli_oracle******.com

http://www.pcandvg.com/*****party8_w.html
Liked this one. Feels professional. Like the idea of the style buttons.

http://www.pcandvg.com/***********3.html
Personally I am not sure on this one. This part http://www.pcandvg.com/***********_3.html the smaller images need physically need shrinking without using the handles on the image.

http://www.pcandvg.com/wii.html
Colours are fine, just needs the page to be not quite so wide.

No. 1 looks really well, like that one alot. The only small thing is like no. 3. the first thing are ads....maybe consider putting them down the RHS of the page?

No. 2. I intitally didn't like it but kept going back because it's kind of quirky!

No. 3. Can you put a heading or something up top....the first thing you see are two google ads. Also the page looks too wide and the body isn't centred.

Hope this was ok.

Michele

thanks both of you.

Hi ... must admit I totally agree with the other comments ... really loved the first one ... not sure about the second or the third ones ... good luck wiht it all

No problem David A,

Anytime.

Michele