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    Default Please critique my site

    just got it finished...

    www.bodyforlifemassotherapy.com

    thanks!

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    Hi there,

    I like your site. Easy to read. I've checked all the pages and I think you should center them all.

    Cheers,

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    What a nice site. The colors are soothing, and the text is quite easily read.
    Except for the infant massage page, which is in a different font for some reason.
    This site is full of good information, clearly stated and well presented.
    Good work, and good luck.
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    Looking real good. As Nzbr noticed the pages would look better centred.

    Good luck.

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    Hi Boo,

    The text block in the centre of your pages appears to be to small and the text therefore overlaps.

    Instead of repeating your links path in the 'alt text' of your nav bar, rather give a 'keyword rich' description of the buttons/links.

    Cheers,

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    Pamela: Very, Very Nice. I don't see the overlapping that Beer talks about. I do agree with changing your alternate text on your nav bars to something more inviting. Great picture of you on the home page. Very good and relevent information. Fee's stated clearly, benefits, etc. All is GREAT! You have done a wonderful job. At this point you may want to do some search engine optimization. Bethers has some excellent points that you can find in my signature line below. Good luck and YES!!!! MASSAGE'S ARE GREAT!!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Dream Lady View Post
    I don't see the overlapping that Beer talks about.
    Boo,
    The front page looks much better with the text now fitting into the background block. Have a look you seem to have lost the centre alignment on the page.

    Failed to mention earlier: "You've got a good looking site, which is easy to get around" Well done.

    Cheers,

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    Lovely site. Excellent choice of color and tone. Best of luck to you!

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