Thread: Ready for your review

I've been working most of the day on this.
All done except for the "links" page and I need to
figure out how to put an e-mail link in there that will come to my computer.
Please let me know what you think.
Thanks,

-R

This may help (oops)
www.randratvrental.com

It looks great to me with just a few minor fixes needed.
On your TOUR page the picture is cutting off part of the word TOURS.....just needs to be moved down.
On the CONTACT US page the Rand R needs to be changed to R and R.
Just minor stuff but your site looks GREAT!!!

Greg

Hey Rusty

Sites looking good. Your links page wasn't working when I looked at it.

You might consider having your Nav bar in a slightly different color to the background page to provide a contrast but that is a personal thing.

Also you might consider adding just a simple text link nav bar at the bottom of your page just to give a bit of a gap between the bottom of the page and your text. Looks a bit crunched up.

Something like this: Home | Prices | Links | Contactus then hyperlink them to your pages.

Keep up the good work.

Good work

I have made a few changes. Hopefully nothing is touching or covering anything else up. All my links work (on My computer).
I don't have Internet Explorer.
Perhaps someone who does can eval the site?
www.randratvrental.com

Thanks.
-R

I like your site, it's nicely laid out and easy to understand.

A few suggestions:

* This is just personal, but I find the page transition effects to be annoying.
* Maybe just a touch more contrast between your mneu bar & background would be helpful.
* It's nice if all the pages are centered in the browser. Saves on sideways scrolling.

Otherwise, I think it's great!

Sandy

Oh yes, and I have IE and the links all worked fine.

Nice site; pleasing colors, easy on the eye, easy to get around.

Agree with Sandy; should make the pages no more than 800 wide, and rid it of the side scroll. Then center them all.

I find your header to be really big - It takes up half the page, and it isn't really the most important thing for your customers to focus on, I don't think. You might think about making it about half the size it is; would look more professional I think. As it is I have to scroll to see your welcome message.. It is nice when your whole welcome page can be read without scrolling.
All the links I tried worked, though as I go around your site I see a lot of wasted 'real estate', that is, blank space. If you reduced your header to a more compact size and moved some things around, each page would be much tighter and easy to read, much more user friendly.
Overall, good job. Next you should read Bethers free ebook on SEO, and start optimizing your site.
Good Luck!

Thanks for the feedback.
I'll continue to putt around with it.

-R