Thread: Does my TV Commercial Work?

Hi All,

My site is no way near done but I would like to know how you feel about my commercial, I will put the site on there as well as a toll free number. Does it load easy and do you like the banner?

Thanks to everyone

www.1world1choice.com

It loaded fine for me ^_^ Frankly I think that's a great idea (tho a cat person I be.)

Banner is great, logo is awesome, but I have a small suggestion. Under the "items we carry" I would suggest you might indent the items slightly and maybe change the color and size:

*Medic Alert for our Seniors

*Baby Buzz

*For Pets


...Ect. It sets them apart from your mission statement and keeps the reader focused.

Other than that, I loved your site. ^_^

Good morning Sharon. Gave it a try in AOL, the page loaed then I received an error message that the plug-in didn't work. Switched over to IE, page loaded, but video didn't. Hate to bring bad news....

Thanks guys, Can anyone tell me ....Does the commercial look professional.

Thanks again

Sharon,

I viewed in FF, a little slow opening, but not terribly so. The commercial looked as good as any of that type (not multi-million $$$) that I've seen!

Great job so far,

Mike

It would require I download additional software to see it - and this is a media computer I'm on - am not adding more.

Sorry - would love to have taken a look.

I can hear the audio but no such luck with the video. The list of items you carry should be fixed like Chahtawoman suggested. but I see the potential for a decent site.

Bethers, is it Quicktime you are talking about that you require?

Sharon,

The commercial is something I would see on T.V yet it isn't convincing enough for me to buy for my dog.

Good job though! .. did not see a phone number, address or credit card information ..

Jeremy,
I have quicktime - and it's not requiring me to upgrade my quicktime but to get a different version of it - which no other video is asking of me. No clue why - but for just this one instance, I'm not going to download another version of quicktime.

Don't worry Beth, thanks for trying.....
Sorry Jeremy, I really liked it as we walk our dog late sometimes..Plus that our dog.