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    lageorge is offline Master Sergeant
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    Default Working out the bugs

    Would someone kindly take a look at my site..I have been trying to work out the bugs and would like to know how it is preforming now. Thanks a million. www.incaseoflife.com

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    Default Re: Working out the bugs

    Great job!

    I am far from expert, and I'm sure someone else will give you a lot of tech. advice, but I think it's nice, simple, and to the point.

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    Hi Laura - I like the warm simple layout, very friendly (I am personally a bit worried you've put your home details up - hope you're not opening yourself up to worrying situations with people turning up on your doorstep) a couple of tiny details - the spelling of co-dependency on the home page, inconsistencies with some spaces after commas and some don't. Also maybe try justifying the text on about me? just a thought. Looks great though.

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    Thank you for the advice. I too was a bit concerned about putting in my physical address..I think I will get a p.o.box. And a 1-800 number as anyone that really wanted to could do a cross reference as it shows my number on whois. Could you explain a little more on what I could change to justify about me? thanks so much.

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    lageorge is offline Master Sergeant
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    I finally saw what you were talking about in justifying myself(I think). I added another sentence at the bottom. Would you please, at your convience have another look and let me know what you think?? Thank you.

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    Default Re: Working out the bugs

    Interesting site,
    -Consider reducing the size of the font, on all pages. It will actually be easier to read.
    -The NavBAr changes order check the 'How it works' page, notice "About Us" drops to 3rd position.
    -Might want to rewrite your Home page. It is a positive thing you're trying to accomplish and I'm sure helpful so don't excuse yourself, be upbeat about your message.

    Good luck

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    I agree with Bill I find when you are trying to help people you need to be positive and have confidence in your ability to help.
    I don't mean to critisize but it sounds like you doubt yourself
    site looks great and I wish you every success
    Two Cats
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    lageorge is offline Master Sergeant
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    I just love you guys. I'll get on this right away. Thanks!

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    SIte does look a lot better.
    Good luck. : -)

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