Re: Please review site and critique.
Not bad attempt, however you need to remove the links to the right of the page on your home page which is presenting the viewer with w right scroll.
You also need to have page titles for every page (and not 'home page, about us etc).
You then need to start submitting your site to search engines, UK wedding directories (if you want to get seen in the UK)
I own a wedding directory which is extremely established, in fact I get many other wedding directories who were around well before me pay to go on my site so I must be doing something right?
You can get a lifetime free advert on my directory if you want, it's www.ukweddingstore.co.uk
I have a 'Gay Weddings' category.
Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.