Thread: Newbee

could i have some reviews on my first sit with voda/mals
site is http://www.123shoptheweb.com

Hi, off to a good start. One of the images on the front page is really slowing it down at 1.5meg LINK
There are a few on other pages as well. Quite a few of the pages are at different widths & giving some side scroll. But all will only take a few secs to sort out. Good luck with the site.

A lot of spelling errors.....

And since you are indeed transacting commerce (collecting money and personal info) online, you really need to develop a compliant Privacy Policy and make it available on every page.
Your "Copyright" disclaimer is a poor 'substitute,' and, in its present form is not only unenforceable but rudimentary at best.

Hi you have made a good start
one of the pages has red text on it, that was pretty hard on the eyes
a couple of the pages must be wider that 800 pixels, as I had to move sideways.
easy to fix these and build on it from there
Mark.

Hi Roxy,

There's a lot of good work there but as Vasili said "A lot of spelling errors.....".

That really needs to be addressed as it undoes all of the other great things you've done.

I do concur with Mark and Chris re the page widths. If you keep it all less than 800 you'll lose the horizontal slide bar that could annoy some of your customers.

Cheers,

all my pages are set fot 800 and i have checked that on three machines , none of them have horiz scroll bars.


Iam having a person proofreading my site and will get back to me with corrections

Thanks for your input.

Looks pretty good...like you said get it spell checked...on your home page
"equipment" is spelled wrong..this sends a bad signal to buyers..also check
your menu bar position..make it consistent on each page..when going from
"home" to "beach anchoor"..it jumps.

Just fine tuning and tweeking.

Dan.

Hi, I got the page scroll on these 3 pages. But you may have your screen resolution set to a different size to the norm? But let other confer this with their screen set ups to if they have scroll.
http://www.123shoptheweb.com/corrosionx.html
http://www.123shoptheweb.com/beachanchor.html
http://www.123shoptheweb.com/links.html




Good luck.

i think i corrected the scroling and addressed the menu,

That looks a lot better, just need to reduce some of the images to a web friendly size. IE: http://www.123shoptheweb.com/IMGP1249%20copy.jpg
http://www.123shoptheweb.com/IMGP1259%20copy.jpg & a few other's

Good luck.