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    Ok... anyone who is interested in critiquing, I'm interested in receiving it. Please let me know what you think and how I can improve my site.
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    Default Re: mistiflowers.com

    I think it's her title

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    You're right.. it's my title - www.mistiflowers.com ;)

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    Hi. You need to line your various elements up so that the page is easier to comprehend. Think in terms of a grid when you are setting up buttons, text, etc and you will have better results. I think your choice of background is perfect for your site but you do need to align things more clearly. Good start.

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    I would agree with the above, it is a bit all over the place. I would get rid of the scrolling boxes and just have a banner with a border and give the information needed on a plain canvas, you can still keep the starry background. Also move the contact form and guestbook to another page. not a fan of guestbooks, tend to get ignored or abused.

    It just needs tidying up, there is a bit too much going on at the moment. Also title your pages.

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    I agree with the others ... also your pages are too wide for the amount of information on the page and would look good centred as well ... maybe consider a boder as well to give it a finished look ... currently the elements look like they are floating ... another thing is consider keeping your menu bars consistent on each page ... by the way I like your music but it took absolutely ages to load ... keep up the good work

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    Default Re: mistiflowers.com

    Thanks for all of the comments. I've not been able to check out the responses, but appreciate your critiques. I'll go in and see if I can't "organize" it a bit better, plus work on additional pages as suggested. THANKS! ~ Misti

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