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    egonudaniel is offline Corporal
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    just finished my website as newbie just let me what to do better,,, check it out
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    Well, I would stop all of the background stuff, it is all very hard to read...Sorry, just my thoughts.
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    Ditto on the background. It's very difficult to read your homepage with the animated background. It's also very hard to read the text over the shapes with the gradient coloring. On your contact us page with the background and the shapes I can barely read any of the information you're trying to present.

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    Get rid of the background. Center your pages. Isn't this a christian website? Why is there fire? Just a thought...
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    Hello

    I agree with the flame thing, very difficult to read. You should try and add some content to your home page as people search the web looking for information.

    I would also move the pictures on the home page so they do not cover your logo. Your logo is your branding and should be easily identifiable.

    Keep up the hard work.

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    Double ditto with hard to read, unfortunately..

    I struggle with maybe trying too hard to be artsy, I think, but remember your #1 goal is to present your information in a way that be clearly understood by all. Keep at it and good luck...

    Ken
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