Thread: Will someone have a nosey at my site please see if its ok? thanks

Hi guys, Ive just published my first site ever. Please will some one have a nosey and see if its ok. Ive checked and checked for spelling mistakes and ive just checked again and still found 2!!

www.halls-marketing.com

I think everythings working ok.

Much apprieciated guys.

Thanks

Lyndsey Hall

Good luck with this Lyndsey, these sort of sites have been over done and you maybe a bit late to jump on the bandwagon. That apart looks o.k, not a lot to really comment on.

Also: Notice you live in Leeds, I am only 45 minutes away in Huddersfield.

Paul

Don't sweat it, Lyndsey!

There are simply far too many levels of personalities in an online Community to contend with, and to stay on the high road and you needn't be bothered by the 'lessers'.....

.... and on we go!

Hi Lyndsey, your off to a good start. Couple of things that are a bit picky.
The bank statement images won’t fully load for me? or I might of caught you doing a bit of maintenance.
And to get really picky! lol, the page is 828px wide, but is cent
Hi, your off to a good start. Couple of things that are a bit picky.
The bank statement images won’t fully load for me? or I might of caught you doing a bit of maintenance.
And to get really picky! lol, the page is 828px wide, but is centered at 832px.
But otherwise, it loads well & is doing just what it was designed for.


Best of luck with the site.
PS, Not sure on the yellow highlights, but can see the purpose.

Lyndsey,
I cleaned this up - and hopefully people who post now will post based on what you've asked. If not, I'll just clean it up some more.

The type of website you've built, is a kind that makes a lot of money - if it gets in front of enough of the right people. The way you've built it is how many recommend it be done. I admit, I'm one that leaves websites written in this manner now, but that is no reflection of the fact that it can make money - and the product can be good.

Good luck to you.

hey jumping off bethers comment-
my suggestion to get it in front of people would be to join clickbank..and have others sell it on there websites..thats how theses sites make it..check out clickbank and see ..
good luck
john

Sir, your webpage is too long! You do not have a website, but a webpage! I hope you are successful in trying to sell your product--it's hard to get people to fall for those kinds of stuff; they're all over the net

Lindsey:

Quite a long and impressive webpage! good luck trying to sell your service

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Sir you also do not have a website, your link in your sig does not work

The best way for someone to find out if these sorts of sites work is to do it. I was warned off doing something once, as it was known to be a waste of time.I put a lot into it, money and time and they were right, but the main thing is I learnt so much doing it.