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    lowerking is offline Private
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    Hi all, I'm a potato peeling Private in this business but have just published my first site for a friend. I'd be grateful for any comment you may have please. I must say that BV is brilliant - that a complete beginner who didn't know his HTML from a HITH (hole in the head) could actually get to publish with no problems is fantastic. Since putting the site up I've been reading a lot of the threads on optimising with regard to the SEs - boy have I got a lot to learn. I will have to revisit all my meta tags and page titles I think. I would appreciate any clues. This is my first post and I'm happy to be aboard. Thanks in advance for responses.

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    hi
    Lovley web site. its really nice to look at, the colours are great and its easy to read.
    1 thing the logo seems to be a little right. ie not in the middle of the top.
    hope this help
    adele
    well done! :)

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    Default Re: new site published

    very nice website ... itcetainly reflectsyou and your work ... a couple of suggestions ... in some places you put an extra space between your paragraphs and in others you don't ... it looks better with the extra space. What I do is write my text in word and setup the spacing then copy and paste to BlueVoda ...

    Another thing that would help balance your pages is to justify your text.

    Something you may like to consider is putting a border around your page. This would give it a polished finished look.

    good luck with it all ... keep up the good work ...

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    Job well done. I also believe a border will enhance the pages much better. the only thing that I would change on the bottom of your pages where it says call me the l's and the 6 stick out of the oval,other than that job well done lots of luck with it.

    Joe
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    Thank you all so much for the constructive comments so far. I'll look into your recommendations.

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    Nice site!

    Just one small thing. In all your pages you have at the bottom inside a circle:
    "call me, Beki on........"

    Can't you find a way to make it so we can read it clearer? Maybe making the circle a bit larger? (upwards and wider)

    Cheers,

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