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    Default Let me know what you think?

    I just launched my new company website, hopefully everything is working fine.

    All comments welcome http://www.logonation.net

    Thanks, Callum.

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    Your have an awesome site just a few tweaks. why not have your menu bars evenly place thats on your baner so there won't be a empty space on the right after contact us. Now the way you have your page title try this LOGOS|CUSTOMISED LOGOS | LOGO DESIGNS for your home page I would think that would be alot better than custom logo designs by logonation and goes for the same on your other pages your off to a great start good luck
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    Very nice and professional. You have done a good job.
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    Yes great site, but it does have to be when dealing with this subject. I am sure that as you play around and tweak it as you go along it will get even better.

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    Nice clear site. Liked it very much.
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    Default Re: Let me know what you think?

    its really looks great....welldone !

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    wish you all the very best. The site it a top job.

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    Default Re: Let me know what you think?

    Hi,

    Nice site! Looked at it really fast. Here is a list of some words I saw spelled incorrectly. You also have a lot of run-on sentences that you may want to clean up. Also, I "think" there should be a hyphen between "custom logo design" (custom-logo design). Advice anyone? I also believe you should have hyphens in other places too (compound modifiers). Honestly, I'm not being picky but only wish to help. Again, great job! Hope my site looks this good when I'm finished.

    Home Page:
    - Whether your (you're)looking for a fresh custom logo design or
    - brain storming and conceptualizing (brainstorming)
    - to accurately project your business, (period (.) needed-you have a comma)
    Most logo design

    Order Now Page:
    - reccomended (but not nessessary)(recommended - 2 times on this
    page/necessary)
    - What (What's or What is - 4 times on this page) included in the basic
    package:

    FAQ Page:
    - logo, eg. (, e.g., fonts, colours, general design, etc.) Fonts, colours general
    design etc.
    - your logo revised untill (until) you’re 100% satisfied
    - logo for show casing (showcasing) our services.

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    Default Re: Let me know what you think?

    all in all, and with some of the changes suggested in previous posts a very good site. have you designed a logo for a company who employs a copy writer? network with them and see if they can edit your copy.
    i really like your logo and the others you have designed.
    simple, eye-catching and professional. great corporate feel to them.
    what i liked best was the way you packaged your packages to look like boxes of software. ingenious.
    good luck with your business.

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