Thread: Feedback needed on new site!!

Hi guys,
I've just started work on a new project and have produced a very basic site layout for it, far from the finished article. The site is not going massive or highly technical but I wondered if I could get your feedback on the general style use of colour etc. before I develop the site any further (or start again from scratch!).
Many thanks everyone!!
Pete Moore.

www.x-bar-uk.com

Hi, not sure why, but the text seems all over the place & on top of each other.

Do not like the splash page, it takes way to long to be able to get into your site, most users will simply exit the page if they have to sit through a splash page, especally one this long. As stated above your text is overlapping on all your secondary pages. All the flash elements are kool but it seems that is all you have concentrated on, no content to the site and to be honest distracting. You have a lot of work to do.

Ditto with the 2 previous posts...............visual is GOOD in moderation but it's content that sells or gets people coming back.

Guys, thanks for the comments. I have addressed the text problem it seems I was using a non web friendly text so hopefully all sorted now.
I have also shortened the flash intro at the start - I would like to know if you still think its too long?? A skip intro button will be added shortly too.
I realise that content is'nt there at present but hopefully it will be soon. Any comments on the general look of the site?? Hopefully once I have some good content and a few decent pics the flash stuff can take a back seat!!
Thankyou all for you valuable feedback.
Pete.

as you dont have a site yet (just 2 pages) do some more work and come back again. Your adjustments are on the right track. so keep going.....

see you later................lol

only 2 pages to look at
flash intro its kool, about 9 seconds till you can enter to the actual site.
it looks like your doing very well overall i like it.....

I personaly don't like the 'ENTER' pages. They are just a waste of time; then on the landing page people should have the main idea about your site and be only 1 click away of getting what they want: the product they want to buy, the tour they want to book,etc.

Cheers,