Thread: Hooray! new site published

Well! this is the moment of truth, take a look at our new website and make comments of anything that might help us, looking forward to your feedback.

Deako4.

www.to-haveandtohold.com

i cant see nothing, it says server not found......

I see your site, a couple of things. First the page is untitled, second why have so much on one page. I looks like you just kept adding content as you thought of more. I would go back think about the site (one page does not constitute a site) there are several areas that could be seperated and expounded upon. I would try to improve the wedding photo, it is very pixilated. Lots of work to be done here, but nice idea and worth the effort. Good Luck.

Sorry still cant see the page maybe its my browser.....

Hi raganok,

There is nothing wrong with your browser... is that de address goes to a link that is wrong (ends in .om / instead of .com)

Change it when popup opens, and you will be abble to see it.

Originally Posted by Lcoisas

Hi raganok,

There is nothing wrong with your browser... is that de address goes to a link that is wrong (ends in .om / instead of .com)

Change it when popup opens, and you will be abble to see it.

Thanks lcoisas
now i see the website
in my opinion its a nice site but i agree that its only one page sometimes for me its kind of boring to see one large page but its your idea i respect that
overall good information.....

As mentioned above I also think you should have more than one page. And you have enough content for that. Why not creating a menu with the different people you have in your family that you talk about in your page?
Just an idea!

Cheers,

first off the site is to much to gather at first think it like a book Ist page a intro 2page the story starts the third page story ends with a sale I wrote this way because you wrote a book so yu should understand.