Thread: Please Critique

First I would like to thank the members and staff who taught me how to build this site.

Your critique is much appreciated.

Shoemaker

http://www.shoemakernovel.com

Hi, sites looking fine. Might be an idea to warn visitors that the links like the Rom, master & so on are downloads. A few will not like this if not pre-warned..

Hi Chris,

I'll pay attention to that. Thanks again for your help when I first began the project.

Shoemaker

Hi Shoemaker,

Nice site...very well put together. One thing though, I would think about having a form on your comment page instead of displaying your email address. You are opening up a can a spam with your email out like that, or at the very least, leaving an open invitation to spammers.

Hi Halaal,

Thanks for the good advice. I'm so new at this. When I began a simple form I read that Naval Design said that a capcha wouldn't work on it. Then I began the Advanced form, but quickly got in over my pay grade. I'm going to continue studying and try to get it. Thanks again, and good luck to you.

Shoemaker

I was more interested in the story....................when is the next instalment due.

Hi David,

I have to take that as a compliment. It took me three years to do this one. They say it gets faster the more you work at it. You're the one that got me through my first breakthroughs here.

Thumbs up!

Shoemaker

Three years to create and only three hours to read............but what an interesting 3 hours that was.

Please continue the story as you have a writers gift.

Thanks again David. I imagine something will spin out of this. Part of the adventure is not knowing what's around the next bend of that crazy river of life.

Peace, Shoemaker