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    prisciread is offline Private First Class
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    Default site in progress

    Hi,

    If anyone would like to comment on this site, thank you for your effort.

    Regards,

    letusreadtogether.com

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    Default Re: site in progress

    Don't know from the home page what the website is about

    Took me 7 minutes to spot your navigation bar

    Still don't know what your website is about having found the navigation and visiting every page of your site.
    Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

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    Hi, although much of the wording is perfectly understandable. The grammar used in some areas could do with some correction. IE:
    Many speakers of other languages
    Might sound better as?
    Many people that have the ability to speak other languages.
    The word "Speakers" is usually a reference to someone from a small group that would be talking to an larger audience in possibly a conference of some type.

    patient.

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    Hi,
    Your menu bar should be more visible (bigger fonts maybe) and the orange you are using is hard on the eyes. keep it up!

    Cheers,

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    Hi,
    Thanks for the comments. They were very helpful.
    Regards,
    letusreadtogether.com

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    Default Re: site in progress

    I found your top banner a little disconnected. the two different texts and one on the blue back ground. It just looks a little thrown together.
    You might want to put some lines between your nav buttons, or a background behind each one, to make them stand out a bit better.
    good start, keep gong.
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    There are some excellent reviews about colours for web pages, I would recommend you a google search :), I'm colour blind so perhaps I'm not the best person to talk about colours but I do find your colours just a bit to bright.
    As Chris quotes "the grammar used in some areas could do with some correction", you cant start a sentence, "That there are". There are would be better.

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