Thread: Would you check mine out too? Thanks

Hi there and thanks in advance for your help.

This is a sales page for a product.

When you initially click on it, the 'header' part seems to be the last to appear, and I really want it to load first, so that any potential customer
gets the instant effect, so to speak

This is only my 2nd or 3rd attempt at putting together a page using Blue Voda, so please feel free to criticise!

http://www.12freebooks.com

Many Thanks, Gordon

I think its the same squeeze page on the same background as about 40,000 other sites promoting those ebooks and click bank.

Karen

Thanks for that Karen, apart from the fact its not clickbank, and the product is totally put together by me, I did state from from the off, that it was a 'sales' page.
All I wanted was some constructive comments.
Thanks.

LOL... Ok sales page SQUEEZE THE MONEY page.. same thing, same format. Unfortunately.. some of these sites manage to do just that STILL.

Karen

LOL.. is this one yours too? Did you PUT THIS ONE together

http://www.ukwealthbuilders.com/

Karen

Guilty..yes I did. But I thought the domain name www.12freebooks.com had a better pull, and I can use www.ukwealthbuilders.com as something more generic later.
But what did you think of the construction, and what am I doing wrong to have the header part appear last?

By the way, as you might guess I did the header using the BV logo maker, which is brilliant to use.

Gordon

Hi you need to do a lot with things like key wording. Things like the phrases/key words below are not within the text of your page. Work from home, cash-on-demand, learn internet marketing.
Remember also that the SE,s cant read your logo maker images as BV didn’t leave a field to enter an alt text into. I am not sure if leaving an alt text tag blank is worse than no tag at all.
One of the SE experts might be able to help with this.

Thanks Chris and Karen

The knowledge that SE's can't pick up the BV logo maker is , in it's self, valuable information.

I think a brand new header will have to be constructed just using ordinary text, (Chris, Is that what 'alt text' means?) and at the same time I will use the advice given reference the key words.

Thanks again, Gordon

GOOD MORNING AN SEASON GREETING TO U AN FAMILY

I was just reading up on you web page I see that you header is constucted with many different pic but all together making 1 picture.

do you have word/ms word or a picture editor

try just making the header of several picture into 1 complete picture
WITH DOING THIS IT NOW IS A SINGLE PICTURE THAT YOU CAN NOW INPORT INTO YOU MAIN WEB PAGE

REMEMBER TO LOAD IT FIRST. TO DO THIS LOAD ALL THE REST OF THE PAGE BUT REMEMBER TO PRESS ENTER FROM THE TOP LEFT SIDE OF THE PAGE SEVERAL TIMES. BY DOING THIS YOU ARE LEAVING SPACE TO NOW INSERT THE PICTURE AFTER REST OF PAGE IS DONE

If you would like futher help in this matter please email my IM at
jdcomputers2@live.com or my house at froggie588@msn.com

hopfully this will help or just send all the seperate picture to my at either email i gave above

domi M.C.E.T. M.C.B.A.
CERTIFIED IN COMPUTER TECHNOLGIST
CEERTIFIED IN BUSINESS APPLICATIONS
SEVERAL DIFFERENT SOFTWARE NOW IN LAST
16YRS NOW SINCE I GRADUATED IN 1992.

Hi, JD is noticing a problem with an easy fix. Take a screen shot of your web page "alt Print screen" & paste it into paint "Ctrl V" & cut out your header image as one. This can then be placed on the page as one image with the alt tag.
PS. The alt tag is used for a few reasons, but the SE,s also pick up on it.

Thanks very much, and seasons greetings to you also...

I did try making it into one picture by doing a screen print, and then editing it in 'paint' and then saving as a jpeg file.

But the quality was awful.

I'll try it as you suggest, using word, and see what the outcome is.

As mentioned before, I've got to convert the text to ordinary text anyway.

Kind regards, Gordon

Thanks Chris, I think I was writing at the same time as you! lol

Please give more on the 'alt' tag, that bit's slightly above my head

Thanks, Gordon

LINK

Thanks for the link Chris, I'll try and stuff this new informationinto my thick skull!

All the best, and have a happy Christmas

Gordon