Thread: New graphic design site ( :

Hi...... the address is www.rednz.net
Feedback appreciated!!!

Hi !

Shouldn't it be written :
"So you're starting..." instead of "So your starting..." ?

And :
"We can't wait..." instead of "we cant wait..."

But maybe did you write so on purpose...

Also, when going in the "Samples" page,
both videos there start playing at the same time,
which is "confusing"...

you cant wait to blind me either.

Karen

You need to center you pages. You need to have some validation in your form so you don't receive blank emails. And some sort of acknowledgement that the form has been sent, it took me back to your home page.

Also on the 1rst line of homepage, you have all of you paperwork.
Shouldn't it be you have all of your paperwork.

Okay, I have corrected all spelling mistakes, guess i forgot to check!
And have deleted one of the videos, the bottom one to be precise, as it was not as relevant. Karen, if you were referring to the samples page as too unorganised, i have organised it in a column format. If otherwise please tell as i would be keen to fix it.

D'son, I will center my pages now, and create pages to redirect form users to, but i do not know how to make a validation code on my forms, so i will need help with that.

Thanks all!

Go into your form, double click on each text box one at a time, then click validate and follow through.

Thanks, will do now.

Originally Posted by aj1996

Okay, I have corrected all spelling mistakes, guess i forgot to check!
And have deleted one of the videos, the bottom one to be precise, as it was not as relevant. Karen, if you were referring to the samples page as too unorganised, i have organised it in a column format. If otherwise please tell as i would be keen to fix it.

D'son, I will center my pages now, and create pages to redirect form users to, but i do not know how to make a validation code on my forms, so i will need help with that.

Thanks all!

No i was referring to the brilliant red before coffee. Thats not soothing to most visitors.. especially before coffee. I wouldnt have seen a graphic if you had had one.. which you didnt... which also doesnt impress me.

Karen

Okay, Please help me understand what you are referring to. I cant make much out of "Brilliant red before coffee", or about the graphic, as i have put my logo in the corner. Please explain to me as if i was 12, which i am.

She means the red is very bright, it bothers her especially before she's had her first cup of coffee (a joke). She's also looking for examples of your graphic art skills but didn't find anything. And your video has a typo at the end (its should be it's).

I know your site name is RED.. but theres a tad TOO much RED...and.. i SEE the logo.. but just barely. Im still blind from seeing it before coffee. And you still have NUMEROUS typos and poor grammar on the home page alone...please dont write any press releases for me.. i can typo on my own let alone PAY someone to do them.

Karen

Jesus christ you couldn't have put it in a more derogatory way. I apologize that my website has a red background and you happen to have some sort of issues with coffee(?), but do you really have to be so rude? Sorry i don't want to clutter my home page with logos and instead put them on a seperate page, and also sorry that you have to live with insulting me, a twelve year kiwi kid, for absolutely no reason other than pure hate.

Thanks Karen, and a happy new year to you.



To everyone else, thanks again, and i have used all of your input to my best intrest.

Originally Posted by aj1996

Jesus christ you couldn't have put it in a more derogatory way. I apologize that my website has a red background and you happen to have some sort of issues with coffee(?), but do you really have to be so rude? Sorry i don't want to clutter my home page with logos and instead put them on a seperate page, and also sorry that you have to live with insulting me, a twelve year kiwi kid, for absolutely no reason other than pure hate.

Thanks Karen, and a happy new year to you.



To everyone else, thanks again, and i have used all of your input to my best intrest.

I wouldn't take it too personally. I am impressed that a twelve year old has put this together especially when I know so many kids who can't get there backsides out of bed. You are however putting together a website to generate new business so sometimes feed back maybe a bit harsh but its only because the people here want you to get it right. Treat all feedback as positive. Feedback of any type is better than no feedback at all.

I also think the red is a bit strong in your template, but I think more importantly you need to look at your logo. It seems a bit blurry/ wishy washy, not something I would expect from a graphic designer.

Keep going. you are doing a great job.

Darren

Thanks Darren. I will tone down the red, and will keep your message in mind next time someone turns up the heat.

And i will also edit the logo tomorrow, thanks

Hi, your getting there. Its always good practice to link to your home page as http://rednz.net & not http://rednz.net/index.html

Originally Posted by aj1996

Jesus christ you couldn't have put it in a more derogatory way. I apologize that my website has a red background and you happen to have some sort of issues with coffee(?), but do you really have to be so rude? Sorry i don't want to clutter my home page with logos and instead put them on a seperate page, and also sorry that you have to live with insulting me, a twelve year kiwi kid, for absolutely no reason other than pure hate.

Thanks Karen, and a happy new year to you.



To everyone else, thanks again, and i have used all of your input to my best intrest.

LOL... .HATE? LMAO.. thats not close to hate. Dont be delusional.. I care less what you do with your site. I thought you wanted to know my thoughts since you asked...so i gave them to you. Jesus had NOTHING to do with it whatsoever.

12? Its illegal to enter a contract with a minor. Are you saying you own this business too? Good luck when they find out youre 12.

Oh and Happy New Year to you too.. what are you having? Orange juice?

Karen

Your Logo RED
comes out as REB because of the white line above the d

Karen,

You're is spelled with an apostrophe.

Thanks.. but on the internet i play a five year old!

Karen