Thread: please check my site

Hi, could you see if I have done things properly, www.grimebusters.biz

Nice colors. Clean and simple. A+ for design.

Search Enging Optimization. Grade of C.
Keywords- Cleaning appears way to many times. Many of the keywords cannot be found in the content of the page.
Description- Good.
Title- How about Grimebusters Proffessional Cleaning Service

Bethers has a great pdf booklet explaining Search engine optimization. Look for a post by her and check out her book. It will really help you get ranked in the search engines.

Cheers-
Keith

Great, will work on the keywords. Was not sure what affect the same words would have,
thanks, Pete

You have a good start, now the tweaking begins.
you need to read and reread your text. on the home page in the last 2 paragraphs,
With uniformed a highly trained staff Grimebusters are is becoming the first choice for a trusted and reliable cleaning service provider.

Our domestic cleaning team provides a daily and weekly service covering all aspects, with the same commitment and quality.

on your about us you have some more like that.

Good luck!!!

The links to Domestic cleaning do not work, and your banner/header/logo and buttons are not in the same place on every page they dance around from page to page. Nice site so far.

Quite a bit of advice here. Not something a beginner really notices. It is really useful having the help. Will try to correct it, many thanks, Pete

Just a couple of nitpickers:

1. Your home page is just a hair too long for my screen, making me scroll down to get your phone and other info. You could fit this whole page on one screen easily by inching the three photos up closer to each other and then widening the column of copy ("We provide Surrey..."). That way, the page would be shortened and it would all fit on most viewers' screens with no need to scroll.

2. On the About Us page I would add a word to the second paragraph to make it "Although the original company was successful..."

Hi, site looks fine. But personally i would add a bit more description on what your services include.
Might also be worth mentioning if you have any green credentials in the cleaning agents being used. Lot of company’s like to add this to there CV’s.
On the services.html page, it might be worth adding some detail/description to the list of services you offer, as the SE,s might think of it as just a spam list. Also on the same page you will need key words & a page maybe a title more like “Cleaning , sanitizing services”. Services alone can relate to any of the industries.

Good luck.

Hi, I think I have done the things suggested before. Can I have views again please, thanks, Pete. www.grimebusters.biz

Hi, you should only open one thread for the testing ground. Otherwise it will get very confusing with repeat comments.

Sorry, didnt quite understand threads I thought the other thread was finished, Pete

Looks fine Pete, but what is the little seek button on there for?

hee, hee--that's actually a low wall!

Really???? Your kidding Right ???? Ha Ha

On your services page you have a list (grey text) and arrows all greyed out except for the last one which is green. I makes me want to click on them like they are links (because it appears that the last one is active) or that that is the only service of the list that you offer. I think they should all be the same, green. And your page widths vary from page to page, some no side scroll, some with. I would have them all the same.

OK.. they are all MASHED together

Karen

sorry, not sure of the terms you use, seek button I think I have got rid of. All mashed together could you explain a bit more please,
thanks Pete

Pete..

Dont get me started here.. im at the bottom of my first pot of coffee.

I merged (mashed) your threads together so that everyone is on the SAME page and just letting you and Chris KNOW they were combined.

Speaking of MASHING

You need to rethink redesign your text layout. In some cases youve used a new text box for every sentence like its a new paragraph but left no space between them.. so it looks disorganized and thrown together.. doesnt read like a paragraph, which it would look much nicer if it was. In alot of cases your text, like on the home page is way out to the right instead of UNDER your header and gapped too far from your images. To me this looks more like an afterthought rather than a design advantage, makes me have to LOOK for the text and decide if its related to what i need to know or not. If I have to take this kind of time to LINK things together in my mind im just going to go look for a more organized site and be done with it, as a consumer.

Karen

Okay Karen, looks like I'm going to be needing more than a pot of coffee to get this right,
thanks Pete

Hi Pete it is still there and your header moves with each page.

Hi Sharon, please can you tell me whats there. I havent got a clue what a seek button is,
thanks again Pete.

It's getting better!!!
On your about us page the first line....................
Is there more than on company? Grimebusters cleaning services was started........

You are getting the hang of it, it will only get better!!!
Good Luck!!

Pete, Sharon is talking about the wall in one of your photos that says seek (it looks like a button). Nothing you can do about it unless you edit the image (like in photo shop)

Oops, your right Mike. Tom Finley will have to take part of the credit for that. Earlier in this thread he seemed to be saying I should put original in. Perhaps I should have gone to bed at that point and took a fresh look in the morning. Thanks for pointing it out though, still much to do,
thanks, Pete

Thanks Ed, That's the last place I would have looked. She didnt comment on how clean the floor was though. I was going to delete the button on the page after quotation, it was the only button I could think of.
Pete

Ha Ha ...Glad you found that darn Button, yes the floor looks clean...

Originally Posted by schajin

ha ha ...glad you found that darn button, yes the floor looks clean...

lol!

Hi, when I line the headers up they look fine. When I go to website there is still a slight movement. How do I get round this. Photo in about us will be changed. Sharon if you are looking the little buttons are windows lol
thanks, Pete

No worries sorted the headers, Ed had already told me at least twice about my page widths and that was causing the problem.
Pete

First of all you get a D for high-jacking some one else's thread.
Your site looks like you are re-posting parts of other sites to consolidate shopping. If this your intention then you get a C. You have some pages that don't look finished, and the navigation is a little confusing.

Think we've been over this like a thousand times in a hundred different ways. Agree with whoever it was that it seems you are just trying to seed link here.

thanks, Pete

Originally Posted by Andy128

Nice colors. Clean and simple. A+ for design.

Search Enging Optimization. Grade of C.
Keywords- Cleaning appears way to many times. Many of the keywords cannot be found in the content of the page.
Description- Good.
Title- How about Grimebusters Proffessional Cleaning Service

Bethers has a great pdf booklet explaining Search engine optimization. Look for a post by her and check out her book. It will really help you get ranked in the search engines.

Cheers-
Keith

Hi Andy, would you be able to tell me what SEO grade I have got now or how to find out myself. No one else has given this info,
thanks Pete

Sorry for high-jacking thread. I thought I would be contacting Andy128 using the quote link. Obviously that doesnt happen. Am not sure what other stuff is about, but sounds a bit hostile. Might be making mistakes, but how else do you learn. Pete.

Pete, I think it's not possible to highjack your own thread!

Check here for several tools that you can use for SEO:

http://www.seocentro.com/tools/searc...-analyzer.html

Thanks for a moment I thought even asking for help was beyond my capabilities. Like I've said before I'm new to web sites and forums and not sure if asking to many questions is a mistake,
thanks again Pete.