Thread: My new site

Hi,
Please can you test my site! It has the same purpose as my last site but i decided my site needed a change of name.
here it is - www.british-classic-cars.co.uk
thanks,
Matt

Very nice, not much different from your other site (which I liked also). You might think about making the guest book a little longer so that users can actually see that someone wrote in it. Anyway good job.

One thing to fix: At the top of your page it's supposed to say "British Classic Cars." The final "s" is on a second line, hiding behind one of your nav buttons. You just need to use the blue handles to give your text a bit more room.

I haven't seen your old site, but this one looks nice and clean. I agree with Ed about the guestbook. I think making the iFrame longer will take it up a notch.

Great job!

Thank you for everyone who has commented so far. I will make changes accordingly.
If you haven't seen my previous website then you can see it here: www.miporganisation.com
The layout is very alike.
Matt

Hi
When your site loaded a lot of the text was out of sync and overlaying the next sentence

I found the photograph of Mr Parsons poor quality which set me wondering why you didn't have a better quality photo and when I'm considering buying something visual all images on the site affect my judgement of the quality I'm to expect.

I would have liked to see a photograph of a print made up ready for sale & I wondered whether the made up prints were signed ? which is why they are a limited edition of 500 as now Mr Parsons is deceased no further signed versions will be available if this is the case I would point this out in the sales blurb

and I noticed a couple of errors

Subject "inks" conflicts with verb "ensures."
so should read either

fast inks ensure
or fast ink ensures

also I think manufactures should read manufacturer's

Mr Parsons was a very talented artist I enjoyed looking at his work nice site


I hope this is helpful

Mooncatxx

Originally Posted by mooncatxx

Hi
When your site loaded a lot of the text was out of sync and overlaying the next sentence

I found the photograph of Mr Parsons poor quality which set me wondering why you didn't have a better quality photo and when I'm considering buying something visual all images on the site affect my judgement of the quality I'm to expect.

I would have liked to see a photograph of a print made up ready for sale & I wondered whether the made up prints were signed ? which is why they are a limited edition of 500 as now Mr Parsons is deceased no further signed versions will be available if this is the case I would point this out in the sales blurb

and I noticed a couple of errors

Subject "inks" conflicts with verb "ensures."
so should read either

fast inks ensure
or fast ink ensures

also I think manufactures should read manufacturer's

Mr Parsons was a very talented artist I enjoyed looking at his work nice site


I hope this is helpful

Mooncatxx

Thank you very much! I appreciate the detail which you have gone into explaining the errors on this site, and will make changes accordingly.
Thanks again!
Matt